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My world Of Emptiness (Free verse) by abbaslittleclingon

Yesterday all feeling missing I escaped to a world of emptiness Hidden from vicious creatures hissing A distant chant to the beat of a guess My icy hot chest is more than seared Chanters keep me hostile guest This haunted place holds all I feared The three tongued creature leads the rest This is where my fears are mirrored So unreal to people blessed My eyes are wide with secret tears As I escape to my world of emptiness.

abbaslittleclingon 25-Nov-02/1:57 AM
Caducus,
Thanks for the pointers.
abbaslittleclingon




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