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Maliced flame

by T'ien

Member since 2002 · Posted 25 Nov 2002 · Edited 8 Jan 2003 · 13 comments

clawed between your driven charm with scratches upon my face sliced within your placid calm and drowned beneath the race preserved amoungst your soliced beuaty just beyond my reach the candle slips askew lifeless skin searing the ash'ed flesh til burning the tendered bone within all that will be left a cindered mesh

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[0] Bachus 25-Nov-02/7:58 PM Reply
was it reall neccesary to go with that name. it makes it completely impossible to take anything you write seriously or give a shit. that's why i don't.0.
[n/a] T'ien › Bachus 26-Nov-02/3:13 AM Reply
to tell u the truth i had no clue wot to name it so i came up wit wot first popped into me head
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › T'ien 26-Nov-02/4:49 AM Reply
TELL US THE TRUTH OR POETIE WILL BE CONTACTING THE FBI.
[n/a] T'ien › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 26-Nov-02/7:19 AM Reply
hhmm lol from the critics i must reason that this is not my best work :) ah well i like it and it occupied me for half an hour
[7] Ranger 26-Nov-02/1:04 AM Reply
Actually, considering the state of mind he's in right now, I think it sums up everything pretty well.
It needs a bit of work, but hey, so does almost everything
[7] Caducus 26-Nov-02/4:31 AM Reply
Not a bad 'ad break' read *6*
[7] Caducus 26-Nov-02/8:21 AM Reply
Your a nutter, nice title !
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[n/a] T'ien › Caducus 26-Nov-02/1:41 PM Reply
thanks im glad u think the re-do is better
[0] poetandknowit 26-Nov-02/7:08 PM Reply
And you are sending this off to Slayer tomorrow morning. What crap. The British are coming, the British are cuming. I h8 ur shit cuz it is jus realeee bad.
[10] cleverdevice › poetandknowit 27-Nov-02/2:20 AM Reply
Is that Brit shit, or just Lark Angel?
[10] deleted user 27-Nov-02/2:18 AM Reply
SORRY BOWY I JUST DONT UNDERSTAND THOSE LONG WORDS LIKE THE AND AND
[10] cleverdevice 27-Nov-02/2:19 AM Reply
Yes, incest is truely terrible, eh?
[5] MuDvAyNe 8-Jan-03/6:42 AM Reply
Mikey, hand me that head and put all your hands, arms and flippers in the air