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Maliced flame (Lyric) by T'ien

clawed between your driven charm with scratches upon my face sliced within your placid calm and drowned beneath the race preserved amoungst your soliced beuaty just beyond my reach the candle slips askew lifeless skin searing the ash'ed flesh til burning the tendered bone within all that will be left a cindered mesh

Ranger 26-Nov-02/1:04 AM
Actually, considering the state of mind he's in right now, I think it sums up everything pretty well.
It needs a bit of work, but hey, so does almost everything




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