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Maliced flame (Lyric) by T'ien

clawed between your driven charm with scratches upon my face sliced within your placid calm and drowned beneath the race preserved amoungst your soliced beuaty just beyond my reach the candle slips askew lifeless skin searing the ash'ed flesh til burning the tendered bone within all that will be left a cindered mesh

Bachus 25-Nov-02/7:58 PM
was it reall neccesary to go with that name. it makes it completely impossible to take anything you write seriously or give a shit. that's why i don't.0.




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