on When I Were a Duck by colbaby
12 Sep 2006, 12:09 AM
Brilliance -9-
on I Have a Brain That Glows In the Dark by colbaby
12 Sep 2006, 12:09 AM
I think Steve Irwin's untimely demise might have unhinged you. Fucking funny poems though :-D
on a limerick from kent by nentwined
12 Sep 2006, 12:10 AM
Uh-oh...
on some deleted poem
10 Sep 2006, 1:05 PM
I read through this earlier and I'm still making my mind up about it. There's nothing wrong with it, but I feel it needs a certain punch, a killer line somewhere. Doesn't have to be at the end, just a moment of originality or imagery or something like that. I do like the semi-repetitions though, like them a lot :-)
on My Prayer by amanda_dcosta
10 Sep 2006, 1:17 PM
Sweet, but it could do with something other than 'amazing grace'. Other than that, nice :-)
on Final Goregasm by creepshow
11 Sep 2006, 9:21 AM
Are you a Jack the Ripper fan?
on some deleted poem
11 Sep 2006, 9:26 AM
Read this with a piano playing something in a minor key in the background. So fucking beautiful.
on Wet dreams by ecargo
11 Sep 2006, 9:38 AM
I found 'mother bulk' incredibly difficult to reconcile with the title...could just be me, I guess. Also, 'spray of sun' was difficult - although it's a lovely phrase - because of the earlier links with night (again, could just be me, I'm tired so bear with me ;-) ). The description is super and I do like the rhymes :-)
on some deleted poem
11 Sep 2006, 9:40 AM
Damn funny but I find the idea of my genitals becoming chocolate to be utterly terrifying...
on The Clock and the Storm by cleverdevice
11 Sep 2006, 9:23 AM
Excellent spelling! Have you gone back to Durham yet?
on Flood Land, East Kentucky by zodiac
11 Sep 2006, 9:49 AM
This demands several reads, awesome lines and a compelling story. I suck at accents and dialects, so I'll have to assume you've got it right, but that's not a difficult assumption to justify.
on Fill Out That Paper by Wakeboarder20
12 Sep 2006, 9:53 PM
Heh, amusing.
on some deleted poem
12 Sep 2006, 10:05 PM
Incredible opener, and I love most of the rest. Not sure about 'mangled sob', it's too...unelegant for the piece. Other than that, beautiful.
on 72 virgins (but the bitches ain't fun) by ALChemy
14 Sep 2006, 10:18 PM
Really, this poem is an explanation of the origin of the phrase 'fucking hell'.
on Farewell, Kind Lover by Dovina
14 Sep 2006, 10:21 PM
Nice. I read this yesterday, unfortunately having spent the day shifting vegetables so the mental image of tender, brave sprouts was hilarious. Now I'm a bit more with it, I can appreciate it.
on Dear Maggie by Stephen Robins
13 Sep 2006, 10:11 PM
Last line's pretty funny
on Be Not Afraid Of Dying. by Mr Pig
13 Sep 2006, 10:15 PM
Sweet, traditional English meets traditional Japanese. Blessed.
on The Ice Soldier by MacFrantic
13 Sep 2006, 10:17 PM
Good grief, Mac - I looked up to see a gathering of 5 users online...4 of which are you! New record, methinks. How's Colorado?
"there's chaste to be chased 'neath the myrtle 'til dawn" -- http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.j
This reminds me of something, and I can't for the life of me think what...
This reminds me of something, and I can't for the life of me think what...