Poemranker [Poem: Solace] [by Miggy] Wed Apr 24 15:15:06 PDT 2024

In the light of all the happiness I have yet to find a way Itâs like Iâm looking for some solace While everyone else is in May There is so much I need to live for Yet aggravation is not in the set And I just need to feel warm After being with the coldest people I ever met (Chorus) If memories past by faster than day and night If random moments could not turn into fright If I have found my way back to stability Then there is someone out there meant for me I am not the first person to think like this Just another case in the jar And if I achieve my longed-for solace Others can recover just as far There is so much I need to live for Yet frustration is not in the set And I just need to feel so warm From being with the coldest people that I ever met (Chorus) There arenât many who would listen to this story But itâs not like their tales are that different And if we all seek some comforting Then we will find out justice in the end (Chorus/Ending)

[n/a] Ranger @ 86.131.60.124 | 12-Sep-06/9:53 PM | Reply

"Just another case in the jar"? I could understand if it was the other way round. Am I missing something?

[1] drnick @ 24.176.22.254 | 12-Sep-06/10:02 PM | Reply

Are these country lyrics? Because when I think of country music I think of music for the musically disabled. I saw glimpses of something that could be something, but I think it's just another case in the jar.

[n/a] Ranger @ 86.131.60.124 > drnick | 12-Sep-06/10:08 PM | Reply

There's a hint of Harry Chapin in here, but not much. He'd have turned this into a proper story rather than a drawn-out moan. The first line has promise, Chapin-esque, but the rest loses that.

[6] Mr Pig @ 86.137.20.84 | 13-Sep-06/4:56 AM | Reply

I've just sang this against Herb Alpert and the tijuana brass band with my accordion and by god its hot diggity dog.

Bravo my young fry.