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Free verse № 143063

Rock Bottom

Member since 2006 · Posted 11 May 2006 · 1 comment

The journey to rock bottom, traps people going too fast. A process of defeat until people give up and drown. Defeat no one can control traps them in caves. Until the process feels like they can assure no resolutions. The journey feel like defeat. The headlong descent into rivers no one can control. The way people die is the journey to rock bottom.

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[1] Edna Sweetlove 14-May-06/3:02 AM Reply
Not excatly what you'd call either original or clever.