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Rock Bottom (Free verse) by dana071287 The journey to rock bottom,
traps people going too fast.
A process of defeat
until people give up
and drown.
Defeat no one can control
traps them in caves.
Until the process feels like they
can assure no resolutions.
The journey feel like defeat.
The headlong descent into rivers
no one can control.
The way people die is
the journey to rock bottom.
Up the ladder:
@#%$!&*
Down the ladder:
Alone
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Posted: May 11, 2006 9:43 PM PDT; Last modified: May 11, 2006 9:43 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.6821256 Overall Rank: 12160 Comments:
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Edna Sweetlove @ 81.179.80.221
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14-May-06/3:02 AM
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Not excatly what you'd call either original or clever.
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