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Rock Bottom (Free verse) by dana071287

The journey to rock bottom, traps people going too fast. A process of defeat until people give up and drown. Defeat no one can control traps them in caves. Until the process feels like they can assure no resolutions. The journey feel like defeat. The headlong descent into rivers no one can control. The way people die is the journey to rock bottom.

Edna Sweetlove 14-May-06/3:02 AM
Not excatly what you'd call either original or clever.




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