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The Ice Soldier (Ode) by MacFrantic He fell apart during the war
He collapsed in the midst of a score
And his eyes became mirrors of red
That reflect frozen eyes of the dead
His gun melted out of his hands
His clothing still rests in the sand
O ice soldier see
What becomes of thee
And I'm sure you'll be
But a memory
MacFrantic 9/11/06
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Posted: September 11, 2006 4:00 PM PDT; Last modified: September 11, 2006 4:00 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.9525743 Overall Rank: 8804 Comments:
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Mr Pig @ 86.137.20.84
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13-Sep-06/4:55 AM
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I was expecting he would have ended up as water.
Good grief, Mac - I looked up to see a gathering of 5 users online...4 of which are you! New record, methinks. How's Colorado?
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