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The Ice Soldier (Ode) by MacFrantic

He fell apart during the war He collapsed in the midst of a score And his eyes became mirrors of red That reflect frozen eyes of the dead His gun melted out of his hands His clothing still rests in the sand O ice soldier see What becomes of thee And I'm sure you'll be But a memory MacFrantic 9/11/06

Ranger 13-Sep-06/10:17 PM
Good grief, Mac - I looked up to see a gathering of 5 users online...4 of which are you! New record, methinks. How's Colorado?




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