Re: a comment on Silent Night by Dovina	29-Nov-05/3:52 AM
Dark Angel can't die he's too clever for that.
Re: Silent Night by Dovina	29-Nov-05/3:51 AM
If his piece was so heavenly would your night be so silent>?
Re: a comment on Letter from Palermo by Caducus	24-Nov-05/5:10 AM
It all makes sense what you say. Its hard to see what needs to change and others see it but seldom say it in a way that is clear. I need to change without changing the good points. Let me know with any future postings if you can. I think I have the ideas and some are too big for my limited ability - I am not saying their i am crap but maybe my ideas are too vast for my talents. Thats the gut reaction from your comment.
Re: a comment on Night song of Pattaya by Caducus	22-Nov-05/2:18 AM
Well thanks for pushing me to raise the bar higher and you're dead right about the mass produced mercandise angle 'made in pattaya for 10 dollars' that kind of thing but harder and more concise. Your comment has made me understand you so much more. Its funny how you pick up on the whole art/painting thing - i was going to call these kids hitlers art as he was a struggling artist (and crap) but just couldnt find the angle. I'm gonna rewrite another version of this for you zodiac.
Re: Night song of Pattaya by Caducus	21-Nov-05/9:19 AM
Grey as kerbs - grey upon grey, plinths for statues frozen in time commemorating nothing but filth.
Re: a comment on Night song of Pattaya by Caducus	21-Nov-05/9:17 AM
Your're there. Child prostitution and the occasional murder and cover up. Noone their cares though so covering up the invisible is ironic. As usual I'm in a happy mood lol.
Re: a comment on Bread and blackthorns by Caducus	15-Nov-05/1:25 AM
I know I'm flawed I just do the best from what I got.
Re: I LOVE A PROSTITUTE by Bhaskaryya	10-Nov-05/3:13 AM
We're all whores at some point in our lives. Poets are the worst kind, we like to parade our words hoping others buy what we say.
Re: phases of futility... by Bhaskaryya	10-Nov-05/3:11 AM
Indulgent. The opening line works but I'm left thinking if their is more beyond the surface to this or if its my overactive mind. Last stanza drop stirs up the leaves (you dont need THE) Otherwise quite solid.
Re: The Embrowning by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	8-Nov-05/6:55 AM
bowel moving
Re: "46 million babies a year" by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	8-Nov-05/6:54 AM
Edward Longshanks once said of the scottish cad william wallace "A man does himself good business when he rids himself of a turd" Vintage. Love the bit about the coward and a brush. What is the inspiration behind your poemes of poo?
Re: Farm animals by INTRANSIT	8-Nov-05/6:47 AM
Check you out with your gift of ghazal sheesh this i sgood - love the image on the butcher.
Re: a comment on The Other by Caducus	8-Nov-05/6:41 AM
I think you're right about dropping fridays i just stood up with my barotone voice and it sounded better. Actually I read it with my best nicholas cage voice
Re: To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	8-Nov-05/5:08 AM
I got some ideas from this - inspiring and bar raising.
Re: Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina	8-Nov-05/5:06 AM
Credit where its due this is the best I've seen from you and deserves comments. I see a lot of control in this and the language form is a detraction from your usual style. In a word - graceful.
Re: Ruins by Caducus	24-Oct-05/3:26 AM
I dont know about htis one it was written a year ago, you lot decide.
Re: Marriage by Dovina	21-Oct-05/5:10 AM
I like the thoughts in this poem they are well written and orchestrated and though a mere opinion of one a damn eloquent one at that. This in my humble opinion is one of your strongest - its very good. Its also a good piece to do open mic.
Re: The nymph steals the farm-son by <~>	20-Oct-05/9:23 AM
I want lines 5 and 8 - lathe wonderful use of it too.
Re: My deepest thoughts by poetandknowit	18-Oct-05/5:57 AM
Looking back on my earlier stuff I agree it sucked ass. The occasional line / stanza was okay but I cringe looking back at some of it. My error was to post stuff in no apparent order, for instance I would post a poem i wrote at 20 and then the same day one I just wrote at 27 and its no wonder you thought 'what the fuck'? I realized this error and birthed the swine - now I hope some of my later ones (the last 30 or so) are passable. I was an arrogant cunt and apologize.
Re: a comment on The End by Caducus	15-Oct-05/4:58 AM
Glad too. The author of ten nibs are her fingers stroking me through making love. Writing/Carving a memory which scarred. This poem is a typical example of locking the door while you write so you are not interrupted. Flawed because of it but thanks for the negs and positve comments -one i wil have to revisit.