Re: love shall set you free by stacylynn_3	26-Mar-03/12:59 AM
love is a turkish prison. however the romantic side of me can dig this, but you got the devil beating the shit out of my angel in this shoulders war i'm having 7
Re: The grand embeddiment by horus8	26-Mar-03/12:52 AM
Behold, the man with the acid tongue !
Re: Awe, I'm like so shocked by horus8	26-Mar-03/12:51 AM
atomic hopefull's - apt, very apt
Re: Awe, I'm like so shocked by horus8	26-Mar-03/12:50 AM
A bit of a shocker this one. I think saying less on a subject of war says so much more at the moment because everyones a bit paranoid, concerned and disgusted and i for one feel so many thoughts, opinions, emotions inside about this damn war and your haiku says all it needs too, a diary of the times and no hint of patriotism (I am not saying you are not by the way) , smoke this: 8
Re: We The People by thepinkbunnyofdoom	25-Mar-03/9:37 AM
Delete the comment jeremi left hes pasted it from a comment I LEFT on poetandknowits work, sorry for the inconvenience, good work here by the way, I owe you some time in looking at more of yours as you have mine --8
Re: Ment to be confusing by thepinkbunnyofdoom	25-Mar-03/4:30 AM
Pinkbunny, I dont know why Jeremi pasted my comment left on the recent 'Oxywarmonger' by poetandknowit, it has nothing to do with me but sorry its found its way on to here, thats unfortunate. I have read this poem and think its a good surreal poem, 8. I was surprised to see this plagiarixzed comment, once again apologies, speak to jeremi who pasted it.
Re: Oxywarmonger by poetandknowit	24-Mar-03/9:36 AM
You insinuate that I am Maffy and you have also insinuated that Mr Pig is me on both counts that is childish and wrong. Who the hell are you to say who I am? As for that laughable remark regarding the so called fact that you voted me in to the top 15 that is total and utter bullshit and you know it. I challenge you to find one just one positive comment on any of my poems, you will not because you havent. Also if you doid vote me in to the top 15 why not actually say something nice, how can I know you have left a good vote if you refrain from following it up with a comment, WHY ? I know why because you don?t want to say anything nice, for whatever reason, maybe the reason is you are incapable of being sincere, you are a hypocrite by saying I am a vote obsessive when YOU went on to the comments section of poemranker whining like a puppy about how pissed off you get at all the anonymous blue votes? As I say you are conceited, hypocritical prat who is so far up his own ass you can see last nights dinner up there. As for bringing ranger into this how would you like it ? this is my beef with you, ranger has asked you many times to follow your critique on his work with your help because he respects your work. And finally I couldn?t give a fuck about votes, so vote your little finger stained blue as many zeros as you like, I understand it?s a form of egotistical masturbation for you so send me your sddress and I?ll even throw in some vaseline to help you on your way. If you are a better poet than me yeah that?s your opinion, I accept criticism but when dozens of other distinguished poets commend my work, you always berate it every single time and I believe you to be highly overrated and tedious. YOU HAVE THE LOWEST AVERAGE VOTE ON POEMRANKER ITS 1.87 THAT PROOVES YOU VOTE EVERYTHING YOU READ AS SHIT, EVEN THE WORST POEM ON POEMRANKER HAS A HIGHER MARK. I feel sorry for you, you really need to get out more. By the way the only thing swooning over you is that enormous dick thats on your head.
Re: One Country by poetandknowit	24-Mar-03/1:56 AM
5 anonymous blue votes do not make this a poem, as you once said - quote: you are truly the barbara courtland of poemranker. what goes around comes around, and trust me it will.
Re: Oxywarmonger by poetandknowit	24-Mar-03/1:52 AM
Whatever MAffy said he got one thing right, VAIN, you are a pisspoor attempt at being vain. Feel free to delete my comment I am deleting all of yours PK why? because your a gobshite. ha ha ha ha ha ha ha, you like doing that dont you. fucking loser.
Re: Oxywarmonger by poetandknowit	24-Mar-03/1:52 AM
Whatever MAffy said he got one thing right, VAIN, you are a pisspoor attempt at being vain. Feel free to delete my comment I am deleting all of yours PK why? because your a gobshite. ha ha ha ha ha ha ha, you like doing that dont you. fucking loser.
Re: Controlling Desire by maffy	23-Mar-03/3:19 PM
This is laxitive for the eyes
Re: Lover's Portrait by Dancer	17-Mar-03/6:49 AM
its not that bad, but it could be better the end is teen magazine style
Re: Desired Height by Wulf	17-Mar-03/6:46 AM
not much shape to it, reads like a rough draft but its got potential
Re: kiss by elizabethann	17-Mar-03/6:15 AM
I was salivating like Homer Simpson over a can of Duff reading this, loved all of it but the last bits to sickly, please remove it, all you wanna go for is sensual and you sold it to me. Love to meet you pissed. 8
Re: Looks like war, but tastes like chicken by Jeremi B. Handrinos	17-Mar-03/6:13 AM
line 3 very clever, america is eaten by greed, finger licking good connection of freedom, really kicks the ass of irony so hard it pukes from the mouth. Last stanza is it needed? 8
Re: Thracian mountains until the Sea by Shardik	17-Mar-03/6:09 AM
I hope this gets the recognition you deserve here for this adventurous piece. I see where you could have been inspired about this after reading Corinthians 14:2,9, lots of fun in this to be found, hellenic culture, doctrines and I am trying to study this to find the connections I think your writing about. Cant really vote till its absorbed. Polished balls though for finding such a subject, nice one
Re: What Do You Want From Me? by Bonehiss	15-Mar-03/2:55 AM
This is pretty fine, nice touches in this like lines 4/6/7/8, after the needle in the eye a reference to blindness would be cool, think of a metaphor about manipulation or something, eyes are so so vulnerable and so much can be said about them, they see they cry, they puncture, they close, open, roll, go red, grey white fuck me gimme gimme gimme that killer line
Re: To My Grave by Bonehiss	15-Mar-03/2:51 AM
The end of S2 And all of S3 is ethereal but the 'stuff' is frustrating what is the stuff? is it relevant? i felt denied not knowing. Otherwise with a bit of chinking this could shine like an ice sculpture. 7
Re: a poet in the city by Bill Z Bub	14-Mar-03/9:42 AM
You and Intransit are similar in style, just thought i'd mention it before i run like a gibbon and shout red nose day.
Re: a poet in the city by Bill Z Bub	14-Mar-03/9:41 AM
Stanza 3 is hilarious my pants i have truly pissed. This is a real feelgood poem for the reader, an indulgence of humour and damn fine poetry. ( that gods wife gets about in tributes dont she) =============10