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Controlling Desire (Lyric) by maffy
You split my skin, Your fingers run riot, But I know where you been, I ask, You deny it. When all I wanted was the dream, You closed your eyes and felt him, My love was blind but always seen, Always obscene. (chorus) I'm not the one controlling desire, but too helpless to deny you, Close your eyes and count to ten, think of me with other men, Its not temptation, Its penetration, Just about the river of pleasure that flows, I could not compare thee to a rose. Its controlling desire, through cuticles of fire, Muscles contract, You on the wire.

Up the ladder: You tell me I suck *2*
Down the ladder: Morning Gory

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10043
Posted: March 23, 2003 11:55 AM PST; Last modified: March 23, 2003 4:57 PM PST
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Comments:
[8] Caducus @ 195.92.194.17 | 23-Mar-03/3:19 PM | Reply
This is laxitive for the eyes
[4] <~> @ 172.130.122.101 | 23-Mar-03/4:53 PM | Reply
so, you're in love with a necrophiliac medical examiner???? ew.!!!!
[n/a] deleted user @ 66.240.35.170 | 27-Feb-06/11:04 AM | Reply
this poem is REALLY excellent.
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