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You tell me I suck *2* (Free verse) by Dead Poet You tell me I suck because you know and I know that your an ignorant
little f***.You talk your s*** but your dying on your back because of
the things you burned into me. You cry for help but no one can hear your
pathetic plee of a cry. Now you know how it is to cry.
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Posted: March 21, 2003 1:08 PM PST; Last modified: March 21, 2003 1:08 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.880797 Overall Rank: 10042 Comments:
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LilMsLadyPoet @ 172.170.96.191
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8-Jun-05/9:11 PM
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This is poetry? Hmmm....and to call someone ignorant, and then to use 'your' for 'you're' (as in, you are), REPEATEDLY....sorry...not impressed...at all.
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