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You tell me I suck *2* (Free verse) by Dead Poet

You tell me I suck because you know and I know that your an ignorant little f***.You talk your s*** but your dying on your back because of the things you burned into me. You cry for help but no one can hear your pathetic plee of a cry. Now you know how it is to cry.

LilMsLadyPoet 8-Jun-05/9:11 PM
This is poetry? Hmmm....and to call someone ignorant, and then to use 'your' for 'you're' (as in, you are), REPEATEDLY....sorry...not impressed...at all.




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