| Re: Grind by INTRANSIT |
25-Nov-03/11:33 AM |
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| Re: Lines and half lines by aliena |
25-Nov-03/11:30 AM |
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Been there. You make a great stone soup.
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| Re: The makings of a killer by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
17-Aug-03/5:58 PM |
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Jerimi sounds like a great last date. Too bad I'm gender conscious. If I were not I'm sure I would be unconscious the morning after and this scientific method of thinking would be validated by my corpse. Does Jerimi work for the CIA, or worse, is he a law professor? Great thought process good follow through. 9(at least).
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| Re: God is a Lady by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
14-Aug-03/10:38 PM |
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Ohhhh Yeah! That's what I'm talkin' bout. Rather, what you're talking about that resonates superbly. Better than a good idea. It's a good idea well presented. 10
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| Re: How I fuck Freud off in the shower by horus8 |
7-Aug-03/12:08 AM |
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Jeeeeeeezus, help me. I liked it. I have an good excuse though. I've had a stroke recently.
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| Re: smile by nolan |
7-Aug-03/12:03 AM |
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Good one. I felt just like that once-- a couple of times.
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| Re: Border Crashing by JoyLuck |
31-Jul-03/9:19 AM |
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Same thing happened to me when I was 18 'cept my VW wouldn't go faster than 55 downhill with a tailwind.
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| Re: Ode to a Pizza Hut Roach by http://mulberryfairy |
27-Jul-03/11:49 AM |
The Orkin man's Dna will long be gone before "Mamaroach" finishes her crouton.
Don't he know what spraying poisen can do
To him, to us, to me and you?
Silly contract killers.
Dan garcia-Black "Son of Roachmama"
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| Re: Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof |
20-Mar-03/7:09 PM |
Thoughtfully sculpted. This may not be much of a compliment, but I believe it's better than any of mine.
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| Re: a poet in the city by Bill Z Bub |
14-Mar-03/8:30 AM |
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Good execution of the subject.
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| Re: Monday by betty swallox |
11-Nov-02/10:27 AM |
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I think I work there, too.
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| Re: Horse Burgers by flanners |
11-Nov-02/10:25 AM |
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Unclear to me if this is a description of your interaction with your muse (Mist & misery). Is this about your writing process?
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| Re: The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
9-Nov-02/12:30 AM |
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| Re: The heart of self destruction by Roisin |
9-Nov-02/12:16 AM |
Fine imagery. What you mean to say is understood without the (by you).
Been on both sides of this one. Painful but real.
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| Re: AIDS in a Glass by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
7-Nov-02/8:40 AM |
Limericks usually make me laugh.
I did. But I felt very, very guilty afterwards. It has also made me wary of drinking from a glarse. I will be drinking from the toilet bowl with a straw from now on.
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| Re: Longing by deadstar |
7-Nov-02/8:26 AM |
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I see the rhyme scheme but I think it might be better said without rhyme and show greater feeling said without the constaints. I like the positive last stanza after the angst of the first two.
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| Re: My Friend? by Blade |
6-Nov-02/11:01 PM |
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| Re: Blade by Blade |
6-Nov-02/10:57 PM |
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If blade is a knife object the poem works for me but if blade is a is a person then it is harder to swallow.
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