on For my wife by INTRANSIT
21 Apr 2003, 10:31 PM
Beautiful, esp. last four lines.
on Fighting erosion by INTRANSIT
22 Apr 2003, 11:49 PM
How about 'Orangutan' instead of 'Orangutans'?
Beautiful.
Beautiful.
on Check Yourself by INTRANSIT
27 Nov 2002, 10:49 AM
Welcome back.
on some deleted poem
27 Nov 2002, 11:00 AM
Ughh! He wasn't a gentleman.
on some deleted poem
27 Nov 2002, 11:05 AM
There seems to be a 'Lark Angel' lurking around somewhere, any relation?
on some deleted poem
27 Nov 2002, 11:12 AM
'Twould have been very English tea but for the 'fucking', and isn't three a little early?
on without music by Limness
27 Nov 2002, 11:18 AM
Poignant
on The Elephant Olympics by Yardbird
27 Nov 2002, 11:29 AM
chuckle
on some deleted poem
27 Nov 2002, 11:46 AM
-OO-
I'm not an angry knave, though I drew. 8.
I'm not an angry knave, though I drew. 8.
on some deleted poem
26 Nov 2002, 11:52 AM
Beautiful.
on A Little Life by Tom Colebrooke
26 Nov 2002, 12:29 PM
The first stanza is sweet, how about working on the second?
on dream dream dream dream dream by nentwined
22 Nov 2002, 11:45 AM
'the dream we are in dreams itself to be free'- anything to do with the theory of 'maya'?
on some deleted poem
22 Nov 2002, 10:05 AM
Very good
on The yellow rose of California by INTRANSIT
2 Jan 2003, 7:28 AM
Isn't this an affliction we all have?
on some deleted poem
1 Jul 2005, 12:58 AM
That's a new way of getting your poems read!