Re: Meditations on a Human Skeleton in a Museum by Sasha |
1-Aug-04/3:23 PM |
that's nice sonnet ..really
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Re: Untitled. by SupremeDreamer |
1-Aug-04/3:31 AM |
a nice poem ..we shoud learn from that
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Re: Saturn by Bachus |
31-Jul-04/3:01 PM |
That was a nice poem ...i like it
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Re: THEY SAY YOU ARE AN ANGEL by massangel62 |
31-Jul-04/2:53 PM |
i understand ..so i like ur poem caus ei feel like the person who is in love ...try to keep the lover as close as possible ..that's was nice poem ..very good
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Re: a comment on Returning what Iâve despaired before by Prince of Void |
31-Jul-04/2:44 PM |
My childhood has been haunted by the void of illusion and mysterious worlds
i never figure out what it is...
the world i saw it was shapless grey
and people were like that...i know i cant explain
..whatever it's
it's between me and other sides
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Re: a comment on Counting seconds for blowing this world up by Prince of Void |
31-Jul-04/2:40 PM |
You are right ..the world lie to me...i start to choose the different path of life ....made my own identity base on my faith and my choise...so it took years i become a mystic ..with hiden power of vision that i got it mysteriously
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Re: a comment on The Chaos by Prince of Void |
31-Jul-04/2:31 PM |
I agree with you ...thanks for comment ...that really helps me ..
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Re: Four and a half paragraphs of silence by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
29-Jul-04/1:40 PM |
that's really good ..i think some poets had already done that ..I am glad that u try to do sth different from the other .
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Re: today the world is beauty by nentwined |
29-Jul-04/1:34 PM |
I understand what ur mood was ...we despair about our exsitence ..actully lost in the concept that is traceless without any clue ..at that moment the world is pretending of the beauty and glory has made us to think we are so weaker...then the whole world is
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Re: The American Soldier by x0lovelylarnx0 |
29-Jul-04/1:24 PM |
Simplicity create its own beauty ..I am not sheakespeare but honestly
that is a nice sonnet ...u are talented with bright future ..
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Re: Sorry by shit |
29-Jul-04/12:32 PM |
that was good ..descriping why you are sorry ..is good ..i like it
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Re: Sleep by hobojo |
29-Jul-04/12:28 PM |
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Re: The circle of life by sanity |
29-Jul-04/12:24 PM |
that was good ...the poetry mean to be the way we understand what life is in the sense of the whole concept of what we are doing here and where we are going ..it's a nice poem in this way
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Re: a comment on Depth of Void by Prince of Void |
29-Jul-04/12:10 PM |
That was beauty of you ..Poemgirl ..thanks
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Re: Crazy with a Capital K by D. $ Fontera |
25-Jul-04/11:51 PM |
that was good ..i like it
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Re: Returning what Iâve despaired before by Prince of Void |
25-Jul-04/1:16 PM |
The Despair haunted the eternity
I canât walk awayâ¦I still rule the chaos as prince of void
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Re: Depth of Void by Prince of Void |
22-Jul-04/4:50 AM |
The ambiguity creates it own beauty â¦in the world of alternatives â¦
So I should see the world in different aspects or ways
I mean I am just trying to define my own definition of another vision
That I got it from the experiencesâ¦thatâs really different with others
Itâs clear â¦take the step that might not be accepted as others think or believe
But Ill do what I want because I want to make my own choices
My poems represent me...And the world has been discovered in depth of my imagination
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Re: The Dream by x0lovelylarnx0 |
21-Jul-04/3:53 AM |
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Re: a comment on Nothingness of The illusion by Prince of Void |
18-Jul-04/2:49 PM |
that's why i said ...this nothingness of illusion ..we are tring to do with language ...forget it ..try to understand beyond ...this is our weakness that we are click on things we love ...there are many things in this world we dont love so we are lost in our selfishness and we lost our vision ..this simplicity of the aspect to the truth of our dark world
..thank you ..that was what i expected from you..to react in this way .......let ourselves reach enlightment instead of getting too busy at world ..it may doest exist ..it is jus illusion of your mind ..
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Re: Divorcing Tennessee by Dovina |
18-Jul-04/2:39 PM |
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