on Meditations on a Human Skeleton in a Museum by Sasha
1 Aug 2004, 3:23 PM
that's nice sonnet ..really
on Untitled. by SupremeDreamer
1 Aug 2004, 3:31 AM
a nice poem ..we shoud learn from that
on THEY SAY YOU ARE AN ANGEL by massangel62
31 Jul 2004, 2:53 PM
i understand ..so i like ur poem caus ei feel like the person who is in love ...try to keep the lover as close as possible ..that's was nice poem ..very good
replying on Returning what Iâve despaired before by Prince of Void
31 Jul 2004, 2:44 PM
My childhood has been haunted by the void of illusion and mysterious worlds
i never figure out what it is...
the world i saw it was shapless grey
and people were like that...i know i cant explain
..whatever it's
it's between me and other sides
i never figure out what it is...
the world i saw it was shapless grey
and people were like that...i know i cant explain
..whatever it's
it's between me and other sides
replying on Counting seconds for blowing this world up by Prince of Void
31 Jul 2004, 2:40 PM
You are right ..the world lie to me...i start to choose the different path of life ....made my own identity base on my faith and my choise...so it took years i become a mystic ..with hiden power of vision that i got it mysteriously
replying on The Chaos by Prince of Void
31 Jul 2004, 2:31 PM
I agree with you ...thanks for comment ...that really helps me ..
on Four and a half paragraphs of silence by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
29 Jul 2004, 1:40 PM
that's really good ..i think some poets had already done that ..I am glad that u try to do sth different from the other .
on today the world is beauty by nentwined
29 Jul 2004, 1:34 PM
I understand what ur mood was ...we despair about our exsitence ..actully lost in the concept that is traceless without any clue ..at that moment the world is pretending of the beauty and glory has made us to think we are so weaker...then the whole world is
on The American Soldier by x0lovelylarnx0
29 Jul 2004, 1:24 PM
Simplicity create its own beauty ..I am not sheakespeare but honestly
that is a nice sonnet ...u are talented with bright future ..
that is a nice sonnet ...u are talented with bright future ..
on The circle of life by sanity
29 Jul 2004, 12:24 PM
that was good ...the poetry mean to be the way we understand what life is in the sense of the whole concept of what we are doing here and where we are going ..it's a nice poem in this way
replying on Depth of Void by Prince of Void
29 Jul 2004, 12:10 PM
That was beauty of you ..Poemgirl ..thanks
on Crazy with a Capital K by D. $ Fontera
25 Jul 2004, 11:51 PM
that was good ..i like it
on Returning what Iâve despaired before by Prince of Void
25 Jul 2004, 1:16 PM
The Despair haunted the eternity
I canât walk awayâ¦I still rule the chaos as prince of void
I canât walk awayâ¦I still rule the chaos as prince of void
on Depth of Void by Prince of Void
22 Jul 2004, 4:50 AM
The ambiguity creates it own beauty â¦in the world of alternatives â¦
So I should see the world in different aspects or ways
I mean I am just trying to define my own definition of another vision
That I got it from the experiencesâ¦thatâs really different with others
Itâs clear â¦take the step that might not be accepted as others think or believe
But Ill do what I want because I want to make my own choices
My poems represent me...And the world has been discovered in depth of my imagination
So I should see the world in different aspects or ways
I mean I am just trying to define my own definition of another vision
That I got it from the experiencesâ¦thatâs really different with others
Itâs clear â¦take the step that might not be accepted as others think or believe
But Ill do what I want because I want to make my own choices
My poems represent me...And the world has been discovered in depth of my imagination
on The Dream by x0lovelylarnx0
21 Jul 2004, 3:53 AM
That was good
replying on Nothingness of The illusion by Prince of Void
18 Jul 2004, 2:49 PM
that's why i said ...this nothingness of illusion ..we are tring to do with language ...forget it ..try to understand beyond ...this is our weakness that we are click on things we love ...there are many things in this world we dont love so we are lost in our selfishness and we lost our vision ..this simplicity of the aspect to the truth of our dark world
..thank you ..that was what i expected from you..to react in this way .......let ourselves reach enlightment instead of getting too busy at world ..it may doest exist ..it is jus illusion of your mind ..
..thank you ..that was what i expected from you..to react in this way .......let ourselves reach enlightment instead of getting too busy at world ..it may doest exist ..it is jus illusion of your mind ..
on Divorcing Tennessee by Dovina
18 Jul 2004, 2:39 PM
that was good