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Nothingness of The illusion (Free verse) by Prince of Void
She said “I don’t love you “ He said “I do love you “ Years After years Tears after tears Again she said “I don’t love you “ Hopelessly he said “I do love you” Sorrow after sorrow Over again she said carelessly “I hate you “ Despairingly he said “I do love you” So many years later He found that She was just the illusion She never exists He passed away Without finding out why she didn’t love him? The only thing he found out Nothingness of The illusion

Up the ladder: Interrogation #1086637

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Overall Rank: 2078
Posted: July 18, 2004 2:30 PM PDT; Last modified: July 18, 2004 2:30 PM PDT
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[1] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 80.42.90.249 | 18-Jul-04/2:36 PM | Reply
"Is," he cried.
"n't," I added.
"Is"
"n't"
"Is"
"n't"
Are we just toying
with shadows of illusions?
[n/a] Prince of Void @ 217.218.131.132 > ?-Dave_Mysterious-? | 18-Jul-04/2:49 PM | Reply
that's why i said ...this nothingness of illusion ..we are tring to do with language ...forget it ..try to understand beyond ...this is our weakness that we are click on things we love ...there are many things in this world we dont love so we are lost in our selfishness and we lost our vision ..this simplicity of the aspect to the truth of our dark world
..thank you ..that was what i expected from you..to react in this way .......let ourselves reach enlightment instead of getting too busy at world ..it may doest exist ..it is jus illusion of your mind ..
[1] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 80.42.90.249 > Prince of Void | 18-Jul-04/3:50 PM | Reply
I respect your opinions, but consider this:

1. In our thoughts we experience an idea of the most perfect being.
2. Existence in reality is more perfect than existence in our thoughts alone.
3. Therefore the most perfect being exists in reality.

Now, clearly God is no deceiver, and thus what we experience must be reality.
[n/a] zodiac @ 217.23.37.85 > ?-Dave_Mysterious-? | 19-Jul-04/3:06 AM | Reply
Do you believe, along with the Great Philosopher, that the concept of infinity could not have been invented by Mankind, ergo God exists?
[1] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 80.42.117.173 > zodiac | 19-Jul-04/10:47 AM | Reply
No.
[8] Dovina @ 24.52.157.176 | 18-Jul-04/4:02 PM | Reply
Sometimes it's less painful to think of a person who hates us and with whom we have to live as an illusion. It's not ideal, but useful. Try a : after "The only thing he found out"
[6] jauser @ 64.169.233.120 | 19-Jul-04/8:14 PM | Reply
poor guy he died
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