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Returning what I’ve despaired before (Free verse) by Prince of Void
Began to shed tears What so ever… Upon ashes of vanished years Of feeling the same thing As I died yesterday Reborn today Among malicious faces Oh Again and again Sighs after sighs Being witness of transience within paces To grave yard Then and then Little by little Perished and moldered Under depths of earth For materializing to another day From the despairing seed To High beak sky It causes I’m failing upon the void Returning what I’ve despaired before

Up the ladder: Zipmark'd
Down the ladder: Rocky Road

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.1788044
Overall Rank: 4940
Posted: July 25, 2004 1:14 PM PDT; Last modified: July 25, 2004 1:14 PM PDT
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[n/a] Prince of Void @ 217.218.131.140 | 25-Jul-04/1:16 PM | Reply
The Despair haunted the eternity
I can’t walk away…I still rule the chaos as prince of void
[6] Shardik @ 24.130.62.63 | 25-Jul-04/9:13 PM | Reply
"To High beak sky"

Sir, you are no beaker.
[6] Shardik @ 24.130.62.63 | 25-Jul-04/9:15 PM | Reply
I was once fell into the void, but lucky for me, I was just hallucinating, and it turned out to be my my face in my omellete and a clean nickle of spank.
[n/a] Prince of Void @ 80.253.129.130 > Shardik | 31-Jul-04/2:44 PM | Reply
My childhood has been haunted by the void of illusion and mysterious worlds
i never figure out what it is...
the world i saw it was shapless grey
and people were like that...i know i cant explain
..whatever it's
it's between me and other sides
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