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Re: My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus 9-Oct-02/1:35 PM
jubilant and detached and arrogant enough to possess a certain innocence. odd.
Re: Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof 9-Oct-02/1:36 PM
perhaps the truth does not lie at all. check the eye of the beholder
Re: Dilemma of a Crip by Ninoy_Instigator 9-Oct-02/1:37 PM
get the fuck out, or die.
Re: Trembling Worry by Ninoy_Instigator 9-Oct-02/1:39 PM
just don't beat her when you think she flirts with someone 5 years down the road, mm-k?
Re: The right one by dngrules 9-Oct-02/1:41 PM
sure it will.
Re: The Washing by strider1 9-Oct-02/1:42 PM
what a controlling fuck. washing machines turn themselves off.
Re: oedipus is raising a pint to me now by <~> 18-Oct-02/7:06 PM
this is a joke, right? or some sort of less-than-slow descent into madness?
Re: -=Dark_Angel=- RAP by poemwanker 15-Jan-03/3:58 PM
my favorite part was when my eyes stopped bleeding. or when it ended. both were kinda stimulating, tho
Re: Head and Shoulders by Jeremi B. Handrinos 21-Jan-03/9:54 AM
tea tree shampoo? or something a little more violet?
Re: One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined 2-Feb-03/3:42 PM
the last line feels jilted of a few beats. other than that--much, much nicer. still sways sing-songily, but is much cleaner.
Re: G-Spot Blues. by spank me baby yeah 3-Mar-03/11:44 AM
you are gay.
Re: Fetish Section by vito0090 3-Mar-03/12:52 PM
Why don't you bring their kids into the store to do a little shopping? Better yet! Why not make your own video, and sell it in the store--then you could love them and hate them all in one felt swoop!
Re: Safe haven by INTRANSIT 28-Apr-03/8:44 AM
late toilet paper?

did you left-hand it?
Re: Death Of A Rose (New draft) by Mr Pig 28-Apr-03/1:26 PM
how about velevted blood?
instead of beautiful?
Re: Regrets by Mikius 28-Apr-03/3:29 PM
please change the title to 'Advice from Damocles'.


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