| Re: Jared Leto & Apocalyptic poetry. by Shardik |
25-Apr-03/6:32 PM |
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A MEN!!! no I mean A-MEN no really... they're a-men the best. lemmeseee... HERE it is...Dewie Cheatham and Howe. They're the best!
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| Re: a comment on Landscapes In The Sky by anitawit |
25-Apr-03/6:20 PM |
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technically, myriad is collective. I think more proper would be plural or (a) myriad. check with your local dictionary, to be sure.
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| Re: a comment on I Speak of Expanses by anitawit |
25-Apr-03/6:16 PM |
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bingo. always read it aloud to yourself or get someone to read it aloud to you. you might feel a little sick but it goes away quickly. And it helps gobs.
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| Re: Dear flatulance (dear lord) by Bobjim |
25-Apr-03/7:05 AM |
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might I ask why you feel the need to harass this site?
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| Re: Joshua by Bachus |
25-Apr-03/6:58 AM |
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| Re: Landscapes In The Sky by anitawit |
25-Apr-03/6:49 AM |
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I think myriad(s). I think when you wrote this, you sat down and wrote without thinking, just wrote. and it works. 8 I think the other is better because you put work into it. both are swell.
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| Re: I Speak of Expanses by anitawit |
25-Apr-03/6:44 AM |
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Lines 2 and 7 seem a wee off beat. but it's quite enjoyable.
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| Re: Beauty, sleeping (revised) by Ranger |
24-Apr-03/5:14 PM |
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Nice to know you've got a coach. The woodsman part seemed humorous, to me. And the knigdom manager made it seem like you gave up. Just my view. I'm rather blind at the moment.
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| Re: Jenny Jones, Jenny Jones by bondjedi |
24-Apr-03/6:10 AM |
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Do all of these shows. together.
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| Re: spring by <~> |
23-Apr-03/2:14 PM |
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well.... so much for beer bottles.
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| Re: isms and ities by Amelia |
23-Apr-03/2:10 PM |
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Don't ever stop reaching.....
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| Re: suck fucker punch by wordho |
23-Apr-03/5:49 AM |
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the short uncapped sentences really bring out the anger/frustration. interesting tool you have there. or lack thereof.
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| Re: a comment on Fighting erosion by INTRANSIT |
22-Apr-03/6:00 PM |
What you may see this summer, if you wish, may suprise you.
Thank you much. Monkeys didn't rhyme. Sorry I haven't had time to give yours their due. I still refer to "No descent way".
XOI.
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| Re: Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof |
22-Apr-03/4:12 PM |
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If this ever dissappears, I'll die.
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| Re: When the Future Comes to Pass by e1ementfire |
22-Apr-03/6:44 AM |
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replEnished. A religious Eminem? Liked it anyway.
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| Re: The Days Are Dying by anitawit |
22-Apr-03/6:35 AM |
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| Re: The Trees by anitawit |
22-Apr-03/6:32 AM |
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um, neeter, paki dinged me for opening with a question once. this shows me why. That is the only change. Very good. Less is more always works for me.
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| Re: a comment on Lost and found by INTRANSIT |
22-Apr-03/6:26 AM |
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No. but I see the 'semblance. just wanted to float it.
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| Re: a comment on Lost and found by INTRANSIT |
21-Apr-03/9:51 PM |
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If people are thinking about that flick, then I would say I've gone awry.
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| Re: Noone really knows by CHRMEcountryGRL |
21-Apr-03/9:23 PM |
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You need some concrete. To grind off that chrome.
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