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The Trees

Member since 2002 · Posted 21 Apr 2003 · 2 comments

Did you know The trees were gnarled Where they stood, outside my window? They were eloquent â¦ Were your civilized trees Standing in neat rows Always so hemmed in?

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[9] INTRANSIT 22-Apr-03/6:32 AM Reply

um, neeter, paki dinged me for opening with a question once. this shows me why. That is the only change. Very good. Less is more always works for me.

[8] Tara57 30-Mar-04/11:58 AM Reply

I like the idea of gnarled trees this is an interesting poem...I think I would like it better if there was more to it more interesting verse's like this one