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Lost and found (Free verse) by INTRANSIT Across a sloping meadow
In the grasp
of a grove
At the foot
of a tree
Underneath
a stone
Inside
me.
Up the ladder:
Multiplicity the Hallucination
Down the ladder:
The Trees
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 6.714286
Posted: April 14, 2003 3:09 PM PDT; Last modified: April 21, 2003 6:51 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.4610424 Overall Rank: 2859 Comments:
Magical 8
Wonderful conclusion, it reminded me of the finale of the Shawshank Redemption, did you watch it my dear boy?
8
If people are thinking about that flick, then I would say I've gone awry.
Is this poem supposed to be shaped like a beehive?
it's obviously testicular cancer in remission, daft.
No. but I see the 'semblance. just wanted to float it.
What are we looking for? A little more intrigue perhaps?
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I'll give you a 7 but its nearing an eight
I guess poemranker must be a bit congested as im the first to rank this