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Free verse № 47212

Lost and found

by INTRANSIT

Member since 2002 · Posted 14 Apr 2003 · Edited 21 Apr 2003 · 8 comments

Across a sloping meadow In the grasp of a grove At the foot of a tree Underneath a stone Inside me.

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8 comments

[7] richa 16-Apr-03/11:43 AM Reply
Cute, short and too the point
I'll give you a 7 but its nearing an eight

I guess poemranker must be a bit congested as im the first to rank this
[8] spank me baby yeah 21-Apr-03/12:08 PM Reply
Magical 8
[8] Mr Pig (again) 21-Apr-03/12:19 PM Reply
Wonderful conclusion, it reminded me of the finale of the Shawshank Redemption, did you watch it my dear boy?
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[n/a] INTRANSIT › Mr Pig (again) 21-Apr-03/9:51 PM Reply
If people are thinking about that flick, then I would say I've gone awry.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 21-Apr-03/10:17 PM Reply
Is this poem supposed to be shaped like a beehive?
[n/a] horus8 › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 22-Apr-03/12:10 AM Reply
it's obviously testicular cancer in remission, daft.
[n/a] INTRANSIT › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 22-Apr-03/6:26 AM Reply
No. but I see the 'semblance. just wanted to float it.
[6] anyone 30-Mar-04/11:21 AM Reply
What are we looking for? A little more intrigue perhaps?