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The Trees (Free verse) by anitawit

Did you know The trees were gnarled Where they stood, outside my window? They were eloquent … Were your civilized trees Standing in neat rows Always so hemmed in?

INTRANSIT 22-Apr-03/6:32 AM
um, neeter, paki dinged me for opening with a question once. this shows me why. That is the only change. Very good. Less is more always works for me.




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