| Re: a comment on Fighting erosion by INTRANSIT |
29-Apr-03/6:08 AM |
Why thank you BP217.
In reference to #2: Don't doubt or second guess yourself. Try anyway. You don't KNOW until you get to the end of the thing your're working on. The mere act of trying something new helps you stretch for the next "rung". Also, this is "practicing art"
You can only improve,but you will never reach perfection. Only get to a point with each piece that makes (you) happy. Then up the ante on the next one. Above all else,I believe, have fun.
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| Re: Awakened by temptalia |
28-Apr-03/6:56 PM |
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| Re: Leaving Home by temptalia |
28-Apr-03/6:54 PM |
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I just wonder why it's not a little higher on the list.
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| Re: Yay for Unspeakable Evil! by razorgrin |
28-Apr-03/6:29 PM |
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let me wax mine ears, first.
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| Re: Torvald, the Dwarven Toast-Smith by razorgrin |
28-Apr-03/6:27 PM |
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I ate cereal. My friend ate: Pork chops, eggs ,bacon, toast, usually. I always got dropped. fun 9
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| Re: a comment on Safe haven by INTRANSIT |
28-Apr-03/6:12 PM |
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Maybe one more couplet also?
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| Re: Ode to a Sock by JakeBike |
28-Apr-03/10:51 AM |
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also proves that inspiration is everywhere.
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| Re: Ode to a Sock by JakeBike |
28-Apr-03/10:49 AM |
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Sure! Why not. and tributing Dark Angel as well. how fun. coffee fiend? you should be.
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| Re: a comment on Round Here by asimpleman |
28-Apr-03/6:58 AM |
answer me these: Why is it that what I haul is 90% SUV.
And how much petroleum goes into maufacturing a whirl its her?
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| Re: Nebulous by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
27-Apr-03/5:52 PM |
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you and your big goddamn words...fabolus. 10 for the word alone.
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| Re: a comment on In the hushing silence... by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
27-Apr-03/5:44 PM |
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Thanks. Encarta is worthless on poetic details. I dug up some stuff on the net. the info was way over my head and the poems were written in english lettered arabic sooooo. With all due respect, I'm gonna finish tryin' to monkey proper with the villanelle, first.
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| Re: a comment on In the hushing silence... by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
27-Apr-03/5:27 PM |
caint say that I am. this must be....
Care to splain alittle or shall I consult the mighty Encarta?
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| Re: The Blooding by Mr Pig |
27-Apr-03/5:25 PM |
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even better the third time around!!!
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| Re: In the hushing silence... by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
27-Apr-03/5:18 PM |
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velly goot. velly nize. Next time, smack me around harder.
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| Re: Smack me by Figure 8 |
27-Apr-03/3:22 PM |
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Funny as hell. sexy too..What the hell is up with you?
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| Re: 3am and six cups of coffee gets you nowhere by Blindproject217 |
27-Apr-03/5:48 AM |
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| Re: Death Of A Rose (New draft) by Mr Pig |
27-Apr-03/5:45 AM |
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| Re: Beauty, sleeping (revised) by Ranger |
26-Apr-03/5:58 AM |
Very well re-worded chap. I was a little tired whn I read it the first time. The elimination of the giving up helped alot. I prefer it without the humor, however,YOU thought it fitting. Therefore it has value.
A wise poet said to me: Don't write to make others like your poetry. Write to make them think.
This above all: To thine own self be true.
Shakespeare.
Keep up the efforts, they are paying off.
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| Re: Death Of A Rose (New draft) by Mr Pig |
26-Apr-03/5:47 AM |
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I'm no haiku expert but I find this quite beautiful. My mind snags the petals on the thorns and they never reach ground though.
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| Re: a comment on Jared Leto & Apocalyptic poetry. by Shardik |
25-Apr-03/8:07 PM |
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Aye, the process is worse than the punishment. feel the wallet drain.
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