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Smack me (Free verse) by Figure 8
Smack it hard, smack it fun. Smack it square upon the bum. Tap my firm and pulsing butt, smack my bits and wish me luck. Luck for boys and luck for men, luck I may be smacked again. Upton the puss, upon the stair. Smack until I have no care. I won't cry out, I'll eat a pillow. Please smack my bottom with a switch of willow.

Up the ladder: Johannesburg 2002

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.8333335
Weighted score: 5.493059
Overall Rank: 2762
Posted: April 27, 2003 1:37 PM PDT; Last modified: April 27, 2003 1:37 PM PDT
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[9] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 27-Apr-03/1:42 PM | Reply
Hee hee! Yes.YES!!!!!! eat a billow, bitch.
[n/a] Figure 8 @ 195.166.144.154 > <{Baba^Yaga}> | 27-Apr-03/1:50 PM | Reply
Ow OW !!!!!! I can hardly breathe !!!
[9] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.208.102 | 27-Apr-03/3:22 PM | Reply
Funny as hell. sexy too..What the hell is up with you?
[9] deleted user @ 141.155.152.68 | 27-Apr-03/4:13 PM | Reply
You have some serious issues but good nonetheless
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