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The Days Are Dying (Free verse) by anitawit
(16.12.86)
In listless whispers blow the days
Their greens are jaded, their blues are gray
The sun is stale and burnt 'round the edges
Creation is sunk into a mire
Of swampy inconsequentiality
The days are dying...
I fished my man out of this pallid pond --
He was the only fish alive
Now, we're both rotting in the sun.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.3333335
Weighted score: 5.62753
Overall Rank: 2182
Posted: April 21, 2003 10:23 PM PDT; Last modified: April 21, 2003 10:23 PM PDT
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