Re: Break Down by Jeremi B. Handrinos	6-Jun-03/6:41 AM
My friends engine dropped a valve once. he brought it home in a bucket that night. 3 for the rod. 3 for the ex "hero" 2 for Merle, 2$ for a stiff cup of coffee.
Re: Angels & Dinosaurs by Jeremi B. Handrinos	6-Jun-03/6:30 AM
The repetetive-ness monster is here. I know you write a phenomenal amount and that you've allowed yourself to be distracted for the moment. IF you like these scribblings, then do them a propellor thing they deserve.
Re: sharkmouth by Bill Z Bub	5-Jun-03/5:41 PM
Ok. so, if my catamaran, which sadly, sank,(there's a hunnert mousuits looking for it now) is an ode, then this scU-REAMS LYRICS!!! Hello-o? anybody listening? no? fine. whatever. great piece. drop the 'splaining. go.
Re: wish by daniella	5-Jun-03/7:33 AM
sweet. Suite! SU-WEET!
Re: Jeremi B. Handrinos: Part 2 by wCUNTw	5-Jun-03/7:27 AM
No. He's a 600 cubic inch supercharged JP-4 injected Hemi powered steamroller with rubber edged drive wheel. And if you get in his way, well that's your own damn fault.
Re: Taliban Ambush by scitz	5-Jun-03/7:21 AM
dingdingdingding!! We have a winner!!!
Re: A Moment In Nowhere by Mr Pig	5-Jun-03/7:20 AM
there are no words.....
Re: a comment on Interview with a Steven King by Bachus	3-Jun-03/1:05 PM
Aye, aye.
Re: Interview with a Steven King by Bachus	3-Jun-03/7:30 AM
So tell me, Senator, where does one go when the off, and strange have been so well wrappered by you and the nappied one? WAIT! I know! No ones done the Rockettes! YES! I'm off to Radio City Music Hall!!!! Intransit grabs coat, flails the door open, rushes into the street kneecapping himself on the firehydrant, falls back first into the middle of the street only to have a purple smurf ascend from the manhole (thats a funny word) and yell "Whats all the ruckus?! Me and the Mrs. was gettin' it on when you completely stifled my stiffie, man!" Smurf pokes intransit in the eye with a rolodex.
Re: a comment on Invasion by INTRANSIT	3-Jun-03/6:57 AM
Amen. Thank you, Handrinosan.
Re: Four Chapters from the Detective Plum files by horus8	2-Jun-03/6:41 AM
Your armpit puncture wound has problems. namely gravity. "practically borderline nauseating" redundant? sounds like a semi-serious writ. do it again and do it write. needs a tad more humor if thats what you're trying to do.my <.02. that is all.
Re: shopper by zzinnia66	1-Jun-03/9:59 AM
I'd rather you climb down from your tree and watch a disney film for a change.:)
Re: There is no Happy Hour in Bakersfield, Ca. by horus8	1-Jun-03/9:42 AM
So long ago I read this. too immature to fully appreciate its product. It's fermenting well in my cask.
Re: a comment on Invasion by INTRANSIT	1-Jun-03/9:28 AM
yes,. but what does it mean? I honestly don't know myself. lol
Re: Stopped by zzinnia66	1-Jun-03/9:22 AM
Guess i'd better getthehellouttayourway. Gimme my tiki back!
Re: I shot speed by horus8	31-May-03/8:15 AM
Good. Now I don't have to get lit up and drive like a Silverback on Silverleaves for the sake of growing a curbless days.
Re: a comment on The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose	30-May-03/5:54 PM
Wow. I've heard that fat is flammable. Good thing no one came too close with a See-Gar.
Re: Luekemia Tacosalad by Shardik	30-May-03/5:51 PM
Open mike with a mellow random Sax backdrop.
Re: The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose	30-May-03/5:28 PM
Do you read your own, or have some one read it aloud to you? It's a BIG help if you don't. Sounds a bit repetetive to me. I like the summary.
Re: a comment on The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose	30-May-03/4:56 PM
I do know what a kidney is. It's a...uh....an....well,Iused to know what a kidney was until I started driving a truck! I'm working on my literacy, be patient. please. I don't want to get top heavy and flip over taking a curve too fast. Poemranker is my twelve-step program to recovery. I'm doing well. Thank you for your concern -=Dark_Angel=-.