| Re: First Time In A Long Time by EAger to Offend |
25-Oct-03/10:27 AM |
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Rarely. I don't often read what you write. This was worth the side trip. I'll swing by again sometime.
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| Re: My deepest thoughts by poetandknowit |
25-Oct-03/10:18 AM |
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Ever had a stricture? Annoying they are. The cure is quite embarrasing. It gives you first hand experience of a menstrual cycle. minus the cramps.
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| Re: I have no problem with short people of color or religion by horus8 |
25-Oct-03/9:45 AM |
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Volumetric efficiency. Now, why is it not part of a book? Grappling with not becoming what you despise most I assume. Grapple on.
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| Re: a comment on falling in with the wrong crowd. by richa |
23-Oct-03/6:48 AM |
If you have the alternate writing, I suggest you have them side by side and read both aloud and then decide. After your explanation, it makes more sense, particularly the first stan.
I wish everyone understood what I mean all the time, but poetry wouldn't be a challenge then.
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| Re: falling in with the wrong crowd. by richa |
23-Oct-03/6:42 AM |
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a diamond may cut his windscreen with light. I get the image but is it a diamond or light? I stumble here for some reason. I like it otherwise. Most what you write reaches me, makes me think. Keep it up.
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| Re: Autumn At All Saints Church by Caducus |
23-Oct-03/6:32 AM |
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Cram-o-rama. Pain, Beauty, religion,halloweenish creepiness, love. Damn good details too.
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| Re: a comment on Go On a Business Trip by abecedarian |
22-Oct-03/6:21 PM |
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Stop stealing from Dilbert!!!! Or Bob the dinosaur will appear and give you a wedgie. :)
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| Re: a comment on African Killer Bees, it's not the smell of smoke by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
22-Oct-03/9:21 AM |
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Louie Bloo Raspberry. I'm such a child. Keeps me in line.
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| Re: a comment on glimpse by nentwined |
21-Oct-03/11:42 AM |
If that is an offer, thank you. I need to learn from my mistakes, and replacing my work won't teach me. Deleting my work doesn't help anyone else either. I must decline.
Why is it you remind me of Geddy Lee?
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| Re: a comment on Decay by INTRANSIT |
21-Oct-03/11:37 AM |
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I know I'm a bane in the neck. Once I have "tooled up" a little better and gotten through some personal stuff, I will write better poetry. I assure you that hanging around the fives, while a great group as it is, is not my goal. I'm still learning patience. I ask nothing else from you.
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| Re: glimpse by nentwined |
20-Oct-03/7:41 PM |
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jsp?id=....oh damn, I deleted it. Curse my Sagittarian self!!!!!!
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| Re: Metaphysical Poets by Bachus |
20-Oct-03/11:20 AM |
two questions:
Why only one (C)?
How does one turn themselves over to their ruling planet, anyway.
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| Re: Twinkle Twinkle Little Star by Yatasuma |
20-Oct-03/11:15 AM |
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L-4 with much stronger ties. small bump.
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| Re: a comment on Decay by INTRANSIT |
20-Oct-03/8:39 AM |
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too simplistic an idea, huh?
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| Re: Autumn by Mona Lisa |
20-Oct-03/6:47 AM |
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I just learned that leaves are actually the alter color and that the spring "stresses" them into the green. Great haiku. whose counting syllables anyway.
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| Re: laporoscopic library by FreeFormFixation |
17-Oct-03/8:22 AM |
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| Re: Night On the Town by razorgrin |
17-Oct-03/8:19 AM |
You've outdone yourself with this grouped trio R.G.
Kicks ass.
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| Re: Country music & handguns by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
17-Oct-03/8:17 AM |
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| Re: a comment on The Ren (The magic in naming) by Bachus |
17-Oct-03/8:11 AM |
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Some THING? Or a being? and why the (?) What I found was applied to cats. and I didn't spend the time to absorb it fully. I will in the near future.
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| Re: a comment on The Ren (The magic in naming) by Bachus |
16-Oct-03/8:15 PM |
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Found. However, since you have so many, which one rings true? Is it yours you are referring to?
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