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Country music & handguns (Lyric) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
No matter how hard I try To move all of these things for you I will never be the good boy You had always thought you knew. Yeah, the road was jus' that nasty, and the way was jus' that course but I never asked for your empathy Nor your quick attempts at remorse. I got my gun from a list I got my gun with hard cash I got a gun for my fist And some monsters that I need to mash. You were the one that loved me? When you forced me to open up? No little eel, you are a Morey A bumble bee all buttercupped. You said we were "forevers" While you bled my wrist to bowl What's with all of these Heathers? and my need to shovel coal? I've got a gun for my head I even have one for my tail I got me a gun that folds in two and some buried cash for bail. You fucked me like I was the last, but ironically, I was Have you ever seen a draw that fast? I'm just not one for "because". You should of learned to cook some Before washing my feet at the door How I hated when you popped your gum As we made love upon your floor. I got a gun for Fridays I got one that's as true as you And an extra bullet for that day My gun decides, that it loves you too.

Down the ladder: another funeral

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.365529
Overall Rank: 3272
Posted: October 16, 2003 11:07 PM PDT; Last modified: October 16, 2003 11:07 PM PDT
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[8] irishfolksuicide @ 81.86.246.56 | 17-Oct-03/8:07 AM | Reply
More ironic if she was not true, and neither was the gun, you aiming the gun at youself and shooting her.

'I got a gun for my fist' (to replace my fist I read rather than to hold) is a cool line
[9] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.208.105 | 17-Oct-03/8:17 AM | Reply
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