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Autumn (Haiku) by Mona Lisa Silent nests in fleshless trees,
Which shed dry green tears
In a crying wind.
Up the ladder:
Piano
Down the ladder:
To Michelle
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Posted: October 20, 2003 6:12 AM PDT; Last modified: October 20, 2003 6:12 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.537883 Overall Rank: 2546 Comments:
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INTRANSIT @ 152.163.252.72
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20-Oct-03/6:47 AM
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I just learned that leaves are actually the alter color and that the spring "stresses" them into the green. Great haiku. whose counting syllables anyway.
Different.
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