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Autumn (Haiku) by Mona Lisa

Silent nests in fleshless trees, Which shed dry green tears In a crying wind.

INTRANSIT 20-Oct-03/6:47 AM
I just learned that leaves are actually the alter color and that the spring "stresses" them into the green. Great haiku. whose counting syllables anyway.




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