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Twinkle Twinkle Little Star (Sonnet) by Yatasuma
Her face drifted across the morning sky
Like Jupiter taunting me in full bloom
Be it like some small, insignificant lie
Be it like some impending, inescapable doom
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I gaze upon the sky every night of my days
But no star burns as bright as the light in her eyes
Embedded in the sun, and in all of its rays
Like almighty Cephai, but with much stronger ties
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I stare contently for eternity and three extra years
Until my mind goes blank and my retinas burn
Consider it a nightmare, or one of my ultimate fears
Consider it a white dwarf, at the end of its turn
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My stars have burnt out, in a magnificent cloud
I'd gaze for another life, if the time was allowed
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.5
Weighted score: 5.6723537
Overall Rank: 2026
Posted: October 20, 2003 7:55 AM PDT; Last modified: October 20, 2003 7:55 AM PDT
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