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laporoscopic library (Free verse) by FreeFormFixation blistered bookends
shovel sentences into your gaping ears.
you listen;
lovely layers of lyrics cast a spell
and quell your fears.
Sweat glistens
on your furrowed brow, your borrowed frown
is burrowing down
one sentence.
and the difference
is the dissonance
between detail
and diffidence.
Up the ladder:
Thanks again
Down the ladder:
donuts and such
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Posted: October 17, 2003 2:03 AM PDT; Last modified: October 17, 2003 2:03 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.179294 Overall Rank: 4833 Comments:
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Like the furrowed brow your borrowed frown is burrowing down wordplay