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laporoscopic library

by FreeFormFixation

Member since 2003 · Posted 17 Oct 2003 · 3 comments

blistered bookends shovel sentences into your gaping ears. you listen; lovely layers of lyrics cast a spell and quell your fears. Sweat glistens on your furrowed brow, your borrowed frown is burrowing down one sentence. and the difference is the dissonance between detail and diffidence.

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[7] irishfolksuicide 17-Oct-03/7:58 AM Reply
cast a spell and gaping ears are a bit cliche.

Like the furrowed brow your borrowed frown is burrowing down wordplay

[10] INTRANSIT 17-Oct-03/8:22 AM Reply
Excellent.
[8] horus8 17-Oct-03/7:59 PM Reply
Better.