poemranker ::donuts and such by skaskowski

DetailsThe poem, its numbers, and the conversation.

Free verse № 134931

donuts and such

Member since 2001 · Posted 11 Dec 2005 · 4 comments

slip and slide but i'm alright. my rusty ride has four wheel drive. my lust for life makes dirty frescoes using snow as plaster bedposts.

Rate it

0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

mean 5.67 weighted 5.18 rank 4845 views 226 View voting details →

6 votes so far. Yours would make 7.6 votes so far

4 comments

[6] Dovina 11-Dec-05/2:41 PM Reply
I was with you until "bedposts."
[8] ALChemy › Dovina 12-Dec-05/6:53 PM Reply
Nah, bedposts can stay, lose plaster.
[3] nentwined › ALChemy 13-Dec-05/5:15 PM Reply
I'm just not seeing the paster bedposts/fresco connection.
[n/a] skaskowski › nentwined 15-Dec-05/2:03 AM Reply
that's alright, muddin' and michaelangelo dont always make sense together