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donuts and such (Free verse) by skaskowski slip and slide but
i'm alright.
my rusty ride
has four wheel drive.
my lust for life
makes dirty frescoes
using snow
as plaster bedposts.
Up the ladder:
johnny dowd
Down the ladder:
Somehow, Hope
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Posted: December 11, 2005 12:02 AM PST; Last modified: December 11, 2005 12:02 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.179294 Overall Rank: 4845 Comments:
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Dovina @ 69.175.32.104
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11-Dec-05/2:41 PM
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I was with you until "bedposts."
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ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159
> Dovina
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12-Dec-05/6:53 PM
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Nah, bedposts can stay, lose plaster.
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nentwined @ 64.60.192.131
> ALChemy
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13-Dec-05/5:15 PM
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I'm just not seeing the paster bedposts/fresco connection.
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skaskowski @ 70.225.165.248
> nentwined
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15-Dec-05/2:03 AM
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that's alright, muddin' and michaelangelo dont always make sense together
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