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Chemistry (Free verse) by <Wankster>
My eyes grew in sight as I saw you
Standing there, unaware of my gaze.
I stood there, staring,
But causally looking away,
As not to be obvious.
I could not look away,
Seeing you like this for the first time,
Past reccurences,
A grain in the sand.
I thought you would call me,
Learn my name,
Ask me,
Talk to me,
Want to get me.
You stared ahead,
Focus never detered.
It was stupid of me to consider,
That maybe you'd look,
and see a slight inperfection,
on a perfect sphere.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Weighted score: 5.179294
Overall Rank: 4852
Posted: April 1, 2004 5:08 PM PST; Last modified: April 1, 2004 5:08 PM PST
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Is the ending counter-intuitive, or am I missing something?