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laporoscopic library (Free verse) by FreeFormFixation

blistered bookends shovel sentences into your gaping ears. you listen; lovely layers of lyrics cast a spell and quell your fears. Sweat glistens on your furrowed brow, your borrowed frown is burrowing down one sentence. and the difference is the dissonance between detail and diffidence.

irishfolksuicide 17-Oct-03/7:58 AM
cast a spell and gaping ears are a bit cliche.

Like the furrowed brow your borrowed frown is burrowing down wordplay





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