| Re: a comment on paint me a poem (try 2) by nentwined |
13-Nov-03/2:17 PM |
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Your tuners ear is more developed than mine. Grrrr.
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| Re: Movie Stars And White Trash Weddings by scitz |
13-Nov-03/1:56 PM |
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Capitalize protean? Marshmallow has to go. It's too young. Beyond those, RRRRRoll'em!
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| Re: What the fuck is a HAIKU anyway? by titan69 |
13-Nov-03/1:49 PM |
The internet has GOBS of samples. Look around.
Do you always stutter? writes
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| Re: a comment on paint me a poem (try 2) by nentwined |
13-Nov-03/1:46 PM |
thanks man. My confidence waxes and wanes faster than the sun and moon in their chase.
(ok, so why wasn't THAT in my bag six hundred poems ago)?
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| Re: Count Spatula by Bachus |
13-Nov-03/1:20 PM |
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Not in my dish machine you don't!!!
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| Re: paint me a poem (try 2) by nentwined |
13-Nov-03/5:39 AM |
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Sorry nen, this feels forced. Or maybe I'm a simpleton.
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| Re: Crampa by horus8 |
12-Nov-03/6:51 PM |
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If I hadn't witnessed my own mothers untimely demise due to renal failure, I'd say: Huh? Like every other time. squeak squeak squeak.
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| Re: a comment on Call Vegas!!! by INTRANSIT |
12-Nov-03/2:16 PM |
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Assuming there is a shred of truth to the 3 to 1 ratio, I was trying to say men will never be superior as long as we are outnumbered. Cramming it into a haiku, didn't quite work methinks. Thanks, too.
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| Re: Me and my 'ompanion by ShaNoN+960317485 |
12-Nov-03/7:04 AM |
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Walt Whitman fantasizing he's straight and dildoing a girl? What?????? 7 for the strange factor.
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| Re: a comment on Call Vegas!!! by INTRANSIT |
12-Nov-03/6:55 AM |
Thank you. Yes I am impoverished vocabulyricly. I have found poetry to be a fun way to expand myself. I was unaware that this topic was a no-no in the 18th cent. I wasn't trying to impress any kind of emotion with this piece, only trying to raise eyebrows.
Thanks again.
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| Re: God Save The King by Caducus |
12-Nov-03/6:00 AM |
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I don't suppose you or I or rockmage, have any Ideas as how to end the war? Well, here's mine. Jam the airlines with americans, hundreds of thousands, send them to Iraq wearing t-shirts that say: I know this war is not going to help, how can I? Or something similar. I know, stupid, radical crazy. Let's spitball.
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| Re: paint me a poem with pictures by nentwined |
10-Nov-03/6:23 AM |
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Call me wierd. I like it as is. It makes sense to me. It's just a request from a reader to a poet for some things. It works. But I don't like (dribble) . trickle , maybe. Dribble makes me think of infirm people.
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| Re: Greybie Blue by abecedarian |
9-Nov-03/7:30 AM |
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| Re: Leg humping is back on the menu by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
9-Nov-03/6:32 AM |
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I think the moon was jewish last night. What is the difference between being a racist and having a "severe distaste" for a peoples? Thank you. My eyes are bleeding now. No vote. Well written, however I got nothing from this one. shoot me.
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| Re: an early discovery (reworking) by richa |
9-Nov-03/6:24 AM |
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For the record, I don't agree with deleting comments. And I don't agree with your wings either. This cut SOUNDS perfect to me and I followed it easily. I think the problem with the springs was you were trying/thinking about compression springs versus extension springs. The only extension springs I can think of are on screen doors and engine throttles. Both bad Ideas for a poem.
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| Re: The Birth of an Incubus (Born a child of scorn) by SupremeDreamer |
8-Nov-03/5:42 AM |
Do something dwith this. A sonnet, 4 quatrains...
Go for 8 syllables per line. Good story. Bumpy rhyme.
Do what it deserves.
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| Re: A Succubus Wedding Ceremony by SupremeDreamer |
8-Nov-03/5:38 AM |
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This sounds like a flip on something that goes on in another culture.
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| Re: a comment on Marrowless highway by INTRANSIT |
6-Nov-03/7:36 PM |
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I'm lookin' at 10gs to in-frame my Fuckliner. Straight 8s gotta wait.
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| Re: a comment on Marrowless highway by INTRANSIT |
6-Nov-03/7:27 PM |
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if money were no object.....
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| Re: a comment on Marrowless highway by INTRANSIT |
6-Nov-03/7:12 PM |
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AWWWWW NUTS! The vibe was in the first few drafts. Front drive or rear? Can't find ZEX in my quickly aging tuner mags, though it rings a faint bell. I otter be wrenchin' on top fuelers or something but I screwed up by leaving U.T.I. long ago. weeping.
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