replying on Baggage (3rd ending) by INTRANSIT
22 Apr 2005, 6:28 AM
Did you see the old ending? It was 5.5 lines long. I've always had an apostophe problem. lol. But misspellings? Thanks for your time E.P. 'Preciate ya driver!
replying on Gaping Hole by sonawrote
21 Apr 2005, 3:30 PM
look up: Fighting erosion- it fits the conversation.
on A love apple's just a tomato (edit of "Uprooting") by fevriere
21 Apr 2005, 3:23 PM
I like the spuds at the end. just potatoes/ just desserts. cool.
replying on Baggage (3rd ending) by INTRANSIT
21 Apr 2005, 3:19 PM
There! Are you two goons happy? The closer was a bit long, wunnit.
on f*ckyouoldmenandyourrules by Damien_
20 Apr 2005, 7:44 AM
I begin to stupify. ruh. Please add me to the list of Damien haters. Thank you.
on Hamlet's Horniness by Sashaclese
20 Apr 2005, 7:38 AM
THAT'S entertainment.
on Sudden Change by Dovina
20 Apr 2005, 7:21 AM
Paul, of Le Bible, No? Been to Dallas. Then Houston. Now Amarillo, going to Seattle. Phew! i'm beat.
replying on Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT
17 Apr 2005, 12:58 PM
Isn't NASDAQ high enough?! lol!!!
on We Were Burnouts by jessicazee
17 Apr 2005, 12:56 PM
I like it but I can't seem to make the dead mans curve in it. I may be too slow at the wheel today.
on Looking Over the Blueprints by somemorepoetry
17 Apr 2005, 12:49 PM
I actually get the feeling that it's a small boy watching his older brother with a pencil and paper while he himself draws with a crayon next to him, thinking about how the future will/might unfold. Both boys are young 6/8 maybe. I really like this. upgraded.
replying on Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT
17 Apr 2005, 12:39 PM
Does Birmingham AL. actually get a "winter"? i think not. I said it was EARLY. clean your glasses.
Boy I know that feeling. You should've seen me fuss over a war/freight train poem. I fed it to the fireplace. In the meantime, welcome back, and the current state of this writ has me feeling a bit exhausted. I think that is what you were going for.
replying on Looking Over the Blueprints by somemorepoetry
16 Apr 2005, 6:32 PM
For that comment, I wish to smack you with a double headed yucca. That was very UN- dovina like. Cad. It's very good and deserves marks . (I'm feeling bitchy, can you tell?)
on Requiem for Faith by James Rykelangeli
16 Apr 2005, 6:07 PM
I didn't like -azure-. otherwise, it raged like king kong.
on Semen Quasi-Sonnet by Sashaclese
16 Apr 2005, 3:43 PM
Semi-queasy son-not.
on believing by whispern_smoke_wisp
16 Apr 2005, 3:41 PM
(sees the hitchhiker and goes for the next gear up.)
on I want to slit my wrist and call it poetry by thepinkbunnyofdoom
16 Apr 2005, 3:37 PM
I can't bite at the moment, I'm liking the current.
on Reincarnation by Dovina
16 Apr 2005, 3:32 PM
When I get home, we'll get jiggy with this Irish thing eh? Greetings from Pecos Texas or....
how-DEA!
how-DEA!
on Arab Shepherd (a belief poem for Dovina) by zodiac
6 Apr 2005, 1:45 PM
Public or private, quite good.
I have never seen a pillar of salt
unless it was
contained.
I have never seen a pillar of salt
unless it was
contained.