| Re: a comment on Baggage (3rd ending) by INTRANSIT |
22-Apr-05/6:28 AM |
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Did you see the old ending? It was 5.5 lines long. I've always had an apostophe problem. lol. But misspellings? Thanks for your time E.P. 'Preciate ya driver!
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| Re: a comment on Gaping Hole by sonawrote |
21-Apr-05/3:30 PM |
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look up: Fighting erosion- it fits the conversation.
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| Re: A love apple's just a tomato (edit of "Uprooting") by fevriere |
21-Apr-05/3:23 PM |
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I like the spuds at the end. just potatoes/ just desserts. cool.
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| Re: a comment on Baggage (3rd ending) by INTRANSIT |
21-Apr-05/3:19 PM |
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There! Are you two goons happy? The closer was a bit long, wunnit.
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| Re: f*ckyouoldmenandyourrules by Damien_ |
20-Apr-05/7:44 AM |
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I begin to stupify. ruh. Please add me to the list of Damien haters. Thank you.
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| Re: Hamlet's Horniness by Sashaclese |
20-Apr-05/7:38 AM |
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| Re: ab*defg by Goad |
20-Apr-05/7:27 AM |
Wrapped for my protection. Ha! I needed a good laugh.
two full hands.
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| Re: Sudden Change by Dovina |
20-Apr-05/7:21 AM |
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Paul, of Le Bible, No? Been to Dallas. Then Houston. Now Amarillo, going to Seattle. Phew! i'm beat.
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| Re: a comment on Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT |
17-Apr-05/12:58 PM |
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Isn't NASDAQ high enough?! lol!!!
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| Re: We Were Burnouts by jessicazee |
17-Apr-05/12:56 PM |
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I like it but I can't seem to make the dead mans curve in it. I may be too slow at the wheel today.
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| Re: Looking Over the Blueprints by somemorepoetry |
17-Apr-05/12:49 PM |
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I actually get the feeling that it's a small boy watching his older brother with a pencil and paper while he himself draws with a crayon next to him, thinking about how the future will/might unfold. Both boys are young 6/8 maybe. I really like this. upgraded.
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| Re: a comment on Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT |
17-Apr-05/12:39 PM |
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Does Birmingham AL. actually get a "winter"? i think not. I said it was EARLY. clean your glasses.
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| Re: a comment on Potential by Christof |
16-Apr-05/6:41 PM |
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Boy I know that feeling. You should've seen me fuss over a war/freight train poem. I fed it to the fireplace. In the meantime, welcome back, and the current state of this writ has me feeling a bit exhausted. I think that is what you were going for.
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| Re: a comment on Looking Over the Blueprints by somemorepoetry |
16-Apr-05/6:32 PM |
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For that comment, I wish to smack you with a double headed yucca. That was very UN- dovina like. Cad. It's very good and deserves marks . (I'm feeling bitchy, can you tell?)
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| Re: Requiem for Faith by James Rykelangeli |
16-Apr-05/6:07 PM |
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I didn't like -azure-. otherwise, it raged like king kong.
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| Re: Semen Quasi-Sonnet by Sashaclese |
16-Apr-05/3:43 PM |
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| Re: believing by whispern_smoke_wisp |
16-Apr-05/3:41 PM |
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(sees the hitchhiker and goes for the next gear up.)
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| Re: I want to slit my wrist and call it poetry by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
16-Apr-05/3:37 PM |
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I can't bite at the moment, I'm liking the current.
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| Re: Reincarnation by Dovina |
16-Apr-05/3:32 PM |
When I get home, we'll get jiggy with this Irish thing eh? Greetings from Pecos Texas or....
how-DEA!
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| Re: Arab Shepherd (a belief poem for Dovina) by zodiac |
6-Apr-05/1:45 PM |
Public or private, quite good.
I have never seen a pillar of salt
unless it was
contained.
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