on A Taste of Rose by Richard
3 Apr 2005, 3:20 PM
I'll try to get back to this one, first read ...7.5
on What I Exist For by Dovina
3 Apr 2005, 3:07 PM
sappy or not, it works. have another
replying on You Pick It by durr_T_hip_E
27 Mar 2005, 1:03 PM
Tthe god thing is, it's salvageable. Lot's of good stuff to work with. Now, about those rapp-ish parts......
replying on A good little poem by INTRANSIT
27 Mar 2005, 12:58 PM
I think I do need bread. I'm not talkin'bout wheat, had to clarify. The possibilities might go. Got lots of new inspiration out here. Will rewrite and post as time permits.
TAKE CARE YA'LL!
TAKE CARE YA'LL!
replying on A good little poem by INTRANSIT
27 Mar 2005, 12:55 PM
Ok my fellow wierdsconsinite, we're boxin'! If you're imagination fell that short, it's on you. E.P. got it. Well one angle anyway. Is it only pessimism? Are you sure. We'll have abrew whence I return.
replying on A good little poem by INTRANSIT
27 Mar 2005, 12:51 PM
I do hope that is not the only pickle playing in your mind.
Is it better with (yet)?
Is it better with (yet)?
on Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222
20 Mar 2005, 4:24 PM
i think I did a deep scan of this the first time. This time I swam in it. angry dust. perfect. 100. again.
replying on The Because Collection by INTRANSIT
14 Mar 2005, 4:57 AM
No. Because there should be 100 items scattered all over the page as if they have not been sorted.
replying on Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT
13 Mar 2005, 11:48 AM
Is the cock sucking directed at me? The colors are googling with my eyes and I can't tell. Sorry.
replying on To those that would teach poetry by INTRANSIT
13 Mar 2005, 5:27 AM
Bingo. Someday I'll get the whole anthropomorphism thing. Thanks.
replying on To those that would teach poetry by INTRANSIT
11 Mar 2005, 11:39 AM
See the answer to Dovina above and the comment by Goad. Though I do see the opener as kind of a hiccup.
on Oceans love song by Stacy Stewart
11 Mar 2005, 11:35 AM
"like an imprint of perfection burned inside my soul"
don't like it. I think you can do better. I also don't like the closing lines. I think they can go. But that's just opinion.
don't like it. I think you can do better. I also don't like the closing lines. I think they can go. But that's just opinion.
on Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT
11 Mar 2005, 11:30 AM
I put it back because it is hard to believe that in the entire history of poetry that every single poem that ever went to print was one hundred percent grammatically correct. If that was actually the case, there would be no poetry. It would all be newspaper articles. Therefore, I have ruled on the aforementioned request and I therefore rule:
I rule.
I rule.
replying on Apostrophetic Loss by Dovina
10 Mar 2005, 12:25 PM
Maybe, but at least you're trying to help with the "rounding" of others. I have a copy and it's humorous, factual, and useful.
replying on Apostrophetic Loss by Dovina
10 Mar 2005, 12:17 PM
Surely you've heard of that book, no?
replying on To those that would teach poetry by INTRANSIT
10 Mar 2005, 12:15 PM
Slipped right past me , that one. The forge thing is suggestive of " see I told you you could do it." The fact that I used -sword- seems cliche to me . Dunno.
replying on Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT
10 Mar 2005, 12:11 PM
Can I get a ruling on coinage vs. proper grammar. I didn't just run off and Yield. I consulted a well respected book and made a decision. I prefer it the other way as well,-ously, seems unnecessarily long.
on Apostrophetic Loss by Dovina
10 Mar 2005, 12:08 PM
Eats shoots leaves
on The Snow Globe by Caducus
10 Mar 2005, 5:48 AM
Other than her mascara (flowing). This rocks.
replying on Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT
9 Mar 2005, 7:45 PM
Tamper away. I got nothin' new anyway, might as well learn from what i gots.