Re: A Taste of Rose by Richard	3-Apr-05/3:20 PM
I'll try to get back to this one, first read ...7.5
Re: What I Exist For by Dovina	3-Apr-05/3:07 PM
sappy or not, it works. have another
Re: a comment on You Pick It by durr_T_hip_E	27-Mar-05/1:03 PM
Tthe god thing is, it's salvageable. Lot's of good stuff to work with. Now, about those rapp-ish parts......
Re: a comment on A good little poem by INTRANSIT	27-Mar-05/12:58 PM
I think I do need bread. I'm not talkin'bout wheat, had to clarify. The possibilities might go. Got lots of new inspiration out here. Will rewrite and post as time permits. TAKE CARE YA'LL!
Re: a comment on A good little poem by INTRANSIT	27-Mar-05/12:55 PM
Ok my fellow wierdsconsinite, we're boxin'! If you're imagination fell that short, it's on you. E.P. got it. Well one angle anyway. Is it only pessimism? Are you sure. We'll have abrew whence I return.
Re: a comment on A good little poem by INTRANSIT	27-Mar-05/12:51 PM
I do hope that is not the only pickle playing in your mind. Is it better with (yet)?
Re: Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222	20-Mar-05/4:24 PM
i think I did a deep scan of this the first time. This time I swam in it. angry dust. perfect. 100. again.
Re: a comment on The Because Collection by INTRANSIT	14-Mar-05/4:57 AM
No. Because there should be 100 items scattered all over the page as if they have not been sorted.
Re: a comment on Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT	13-Mar-05/11:48 AM
Is the cock sucking directed at me? The colors are googling with my eyes and I can't tell. Sorry.
Re: a comment on To those that would teach poetry by INTRANSIT	13-Mar-05/5:27 AM
Bingo. Someday I'll get the whole anthropomorphism thing. Thanks.
Re: a comment on To those that would teach poetry by INTRANSIT	11-Mar-05/11:39 AM
See the answer to Dovina above and the comment by Goad. Though I do see the opener as kind of a hiccup.
Re: Oceans love song by Stacy Stewart	11-Mar-05/11:35 AM
"like an imprint of perfection burned inside my soul" don't like it. I think you can do better. I also don't like the closing lines. I think they can go. But that's just opinion.
Re: Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT	11-Mar-05/11:30 AM
I put it back because it is hard to believe that in the entire history of poetry that every single poem that ever went to print was one hundred percent grammatically correct. If that was actually the case, there would be no poetry. It would all be newspaper articles. Therefore, I have ruled on the aforementioned request and I therefore rule: I rule.
Re: a comment on Apostrophetic Loss by Dovina	10-Mar-05/12:25 PM
Maybe, but at least you're trying to help with the "rounding" of others. I have a copy and it's humorous, factual, and useful.
Re: a comment on Apostrophetic Loss by Dovina	10-Mar-05/12:17 PM
Surely you've heard of that book, no?
Re: a comment on To those that would teach poetry by INTRANSIT	10-Mar-05/12:15 PM
Slipped right past me , that one. The forge thing is suggestive of " see I told you you could do it." The fact that I used -sword- seems cliche to me . Dunno.
Re: a comment on Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT	10-Mar-05/12:11 PM
Can I get a ruling on coinage vs. proper grammar. I didn't just run off and Yield. I consulted a well respected book and made a decision. I prefer it the other way as well,-ously, seems unnecessarily long.
Re: Apostrophetic Loss by Dovina	10-Mar-05/12:08 PM
Eats shoots leaves
Re: The Snow Globe by Caducus	10-Mar-05/5:48 AM
Other than her mascara (flowing). This rocks.
Re: a comment on Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT	9-Mar-05/7:45 PM
Tamper away. I got nothin' new anyway, might as well learn from what i gots.