regarding some deleted poem...	26-Sep-02/9:31 AM
THAT'S gonna lead to trouble. Why do women need men when they have cell phones?
Re: #16 by mikejedw	26-Sep-02/9:41 AM
I like it? What the hell did NJ say? OH, I got it.
Re: Conversations with a Clock II by morffrom	26-Sep-02/9:45 AM
What would happen if you changed the last line to "trick"? Too fun! Glad not every one is so serious.
Re: American Poem by ASTRO-GLIDE	26-Sep-02/9:47 AM
GLIDE ON BROTHER!!!!!!!
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Sep-02/9:55 AM
YES! YES! YES! LIFE IN DEATH! SPIRITS NEVER DIE!
Re: A Time for More War by dougsoderstrom	26-Sep-02/12:51 PM
DO YOU MIND?!!!!! I'm trying to enjoy my last hunnert or so minutes before I have to leave.....
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Sep-02/1:13 PM
If that were true, you wouldn't be here. Take heart,but go deeper.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Sep-02/1:16 PM
Ok, What the hell is wrong with you? Do you lose women like I lose my car keys and wallet or what? Thats two in one day!7
Re: that time my friend slipped me a speedball by unknown	26-Sep-02/1:21 PM
Is your friend polish? Hilarious!9 Any thing that makes me laugh gets high marks. Ishould try "medicating".
Re: Deaf by sav876	26-Sep-02/1:24 PM
Hope you're not really deaf. Last line hit full throttle.Liked it!9
Re: RunOnSentence by harrytuttle	27-Sep-02/4:01 AM
I was going to agree with GW but then I pictured the horse and I couldn't think of anything better.A horse doesn't "jet", that would be gross. I like it as is.9
Re: Transfixed (#2) by Christof	27-Sep-02/4:08 AM
Since I've been on this site I've gotten better at studying others' work.This is really good. ditto.
regarding some deleted poem...	27-Sep-02/4:13 AM
"Death, and her kind." Boy ain't that the truth! Maybe just a dash of color to s-2?
Re: West Sands, late afternoon in winter by Nicholas Jones	27-Sep-02/4:17 AM
If more people would "jump in after themselves",they'd be a lot happier. Bravo.
Re: Just For Today by apples_tim	27-Sep-02/4:22 AM
Simply put. I can dig it.9
Re: Nighttime Conversation by unknown	27-Sep-02/4:26 AM
Got the point but it felt "flat"
Re: Up The Road Aways by harrytuttle	27-Sep-02/4:28 AM
I yearn for simpler times too. Thanks for reminding me where my watch is.
Re: Skin by greym0on	27-Sep-02/4:30 AM
Not bad,not bad. More drama.
Re: City Streets by greym0on	27-Sep-02/4:35 AM
More color. Has a "New Yorky" feeling to it. You're in the right place. Welcome.
Re: Sadness by greym0on	27-Sep-02/4:39 AM
Again, needs color (metaphores). Don't say "pain". Try "steamrolled by the pain". Things like that.