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Nighttime Conversation (Free verse) by Sclano -That was a good film.
-It was sexy.
-I'm hungry now.
-Me too. Let's have some fruit.
-I feel like an apricot.
-I have one here.
-Oo, that's a really nice one.
-Here, eat it. I can't.
-This is really good.
-Don't forget the old technique to eating them.
-What's that again?
-Splitting it open with your tongue.
-Oh yeah. Do you want soemthing?
-Sure. I like bananas, myself.
-Here, I have one on me.
-That's a hell of a big banana.
-I hope you don't mind that.
-Not at all.
-Better with the skin pulled down, remember.
-Yeah, I know.
-Well, here we are. Both satisfied.
-Yeah. This is a good banana.
-This is a good apricot.
-This is really a great evening.
-Oo yeah. We'll have to do this again sometime
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Posted: September 26, 2002 8:34 PM PDT; Last modified: September 26, 2002 8:34 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.4178715 Overall Rank: 12944 Comments:
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Christof @ 195.172.133.226
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27-Sep-02/2:43 AM
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Is it just me or is this rude and naughty?
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==Doylum @ 213.122.186.96
> Christof
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27-Sep-02/5:28 AM
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The person who posted it is certainly rude, very rude for having done so. All it really needs to set it of a treat is that old chestn'nuts where one peels the banana till it has 4skins.
Ah, the old fruit as sexual metaphor routine. Should really have used a fig, though, rather than an apricot. Much more genital.
Got the point but it felt "flat"
puerile
this is genius, subtle...yet laser accurate. i feel an apricot plays a mre reliable vagina than a fig...figs can be a bit mushy. while an apricot early in the season can be perfectly split,and appreciated. it's candid style is quite applaudible.??
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