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Nighttime Conversation (Free verse) by Sclano

-That was a good film. -It was sexy. -I'm hungry now. -Me too. Let's have some fruit. -I feel like an apricot. -I have one here. -Oo, that's a really nice one. -Here, eat it. I can't. -This is really good. -Don't forget the old technique to eating them. -What's that again? -Splitting it open with your tongue. -Oh yeah. Do you want soemthing? -Sure. I like bananas, myself. -Here, I have one on me. -That's a hell of a big banana. -I hope you don't mind that. -Not at all. -Better with the skin pulled down, remember. -Yeah, I know. -Well, here we are. Both satisfied. -Yeah. This is a good banana. -This is a good apricot. -This is really a great evening. -Oo yeah. We'll have to do this again sometime

==Doylum 27-Sep-02/5:28 AM
The person who posted it is certainly rude, very rude for having done so. All it really needs to set it of a treat is that old chestn'nuts where one peels the banana till it has 4skins.




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