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Skin (Free verse) by greym0on
A soft touch A hard grip Hands across an expanse of senses That feel so sweet - I'd like to sink in a little further, And meld within your heart beat. And just that touch - Is enough to make me dizzy. Just that hold - Is enough to make me crazy. Just that contact - Is enough to make me feel wanted, And I could conquer worlds In this power I feel, Yet still weak - From the simple pleasure Of skin.

Up the ladder: .:|bittersweet|:.
Down the ladder: Skin, Bone, Flesh & Blood

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.25
Overall Rank: 4009
Posted: September 26, 2002 5:02 PM PDT; Last modified: September 26, 2002 5:02 PM PDT
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[7] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.188.228 | 27-Sep-02/4:30 AM | Reply
Not bad,not bad. More drama.
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