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Skin (Free verse) by greym0on A soft touch
A hard grip
Hands across an expanse of senses
That feel so sweet -
I'd like to sink in a little further,
And meld within your heart beat.
And just that touch -
Is enough to make me dizzy.
Just that hold -
Is enough to make me crazy.
Just that contact -
Is enough to make me feel wanted,
And I could conquer worlds
In this power I feel,
Yet still weak -
From the simple pleasure
Of skin.
Up the ladder:
.:|bittersweet|:.
Down the ladder:
Skin, Bone, Flesh & Blood
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Posted: September 26, 2002 5:02 PM PDT; Last modified: September 26, 2002 5:02 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.25 Overall Rank: 4009 Comments:
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INTRANSIT @ 152.163.188.228
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27-Sep-02/4:30 AM
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Not bad,not bad. More drama.
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