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Skin (Free verse) by greym0on

A soft touch A hard grip Hands across an expanse of senses That feel so sweet - I'd like to sink in a little further, And meld within your heart beat. And just that touch - Is enough to make me dizzy. Just that hold - Is enough to make me crazy. Just that contact - Is enough to make me feel wanted, And I could conquer worlds In this power I feel, Yet still weak - From the simple pleasure Of skin.

INTRANSIT 27-Sep-02/4:30 AM
Not bad,not bad. More drama.




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