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City Streets (Free verse) by greym0on
City Streets Do you believe in city streets- With lights so bright, they blind the eye? Or from a distance, a million blinking yellows and others- reveal a certain night? But I believe in city streets- The truth rings hard within those lights- And no one stops to pity or admire- No face of kindness looks out from the crowd. In city streets we learn survival- How solitary the human life is. We do not stop to smell the roses, but pause only to stare out the window- at the glowing lights- the blinking movement- and the bitterness- of the city streets- below. 1995

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6
Weighted score: 4.8
Overall Rank: 11183
Posted: September 26, 2002 5:04 PM PDT; Last modified: September 26, 2002 5:04 PM PDT
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[7] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.188.228 | 27-Sep-02/4:35 AM | Reply
More color. Has a "New Yorky" feeling to it. You're in the right place. Welcome.
[8] Mutant_X @ 212.138.47.15 | 29-Sep-02/5:01 PM | Reply
this poem is gr8,it has that magic
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