Comments byINTRANSIT, 1681–1700 back. Include replies

on The Nights Draw In by Nicholas Jones 25 Sep 2002, 5:24 AM
You ARE prepared. Yup put label back on. Then "acquire" a ride!
Descriptive warm fuzzies abound.9
on WLPAN by Nicholas Jones 25 Sep 2002, 5:27 AM
Blew my wad on your other poem, liked this one too.8
on myself by decadentlaurel 25 Sep 2002, 5:31 AM
The openness is what makes this work for me.7 Know this: Only you can set yoursel free!
on some deleted poem 25 Sep 2002, 5:34 AM
Not at all. I see this and feel it too. Really good actually.8
on 5 p.m. by cobalt 25 Sep 2002, 3:19 PM
Be glad you dont have a CB to listen to everyones unintelligible droning whilst stuck. I like orange soda.8 Only 'cause I'm still learning.
on Rescue 911 by searching 25 Sep 2002, 3:23 PM
Imagine all the pain and suffering that will dissipate when people listen to their own hearts instead of"society". Ifind no flaws.10
on Life Of Sorrow by squall1leonheart 25 Sep 2002, 4:48 PM
Yes, line breaks. Another good topic. Take heart, you're not like them if you're asking "why". Keep trying but...BREATHE!
on WHY by adrenalize 25 Sep 2002, 7:03 PM
Def-Leppard fan? Wouldn't change much,can't find where.....7
on some deleted poem 25 Sep 2002, 7:05 PM
This seems unfinished,unanswered. I'm sorry for the loss.8
on Noblesse Oblige by Christof 25 Sep 2002, 7:10 PM
I hope you get to this comment.
I've got Isaac Hayes playing and I read it again. I saw it. wow.
on some deleted poem 25 Sep 2002, 7:21 PM
Epic. Like that needed to be said.
I like the touch and go feeling. This ones gonna last.
on The Writing Life #2 by poetandknowit 25 Sep 2002, 8:45 PM
Good flow! Nailed the 5-7-5! What season is it?
on some deleted poem 25 Sep 2002, 8:47 PM
Roll on.
on some deleted poem 26 Sep 2002, 5:10 AM
DAMNIT! Every time I get an idea to write about something some damn bastard beats me to it! GRRRRRR!!!!
HATS OFF THOUGH! Can I still do....
on Fraternity by Christof 26 Sep 2002, 5:15 AM
Thats funny! I really was feeling a war. Then that door-thing spun me good. Fun. I see the pattern too.Thanks for teaching me.
on Nocturne by w~* ATHENA *~w 26 Sep 2002, 5:19 AM
Soul nomad. Beautiful.
on some deleted poem 26 Sep 2002, 5:24 AM
Simple but effective,and humorous too! Do haikus really need titles?(rhetorical)A season would have worked with this. i'm obsessed with seasons.(Ithink my wife did that to me). Loved it.
on some deleted poem 26 Sep 2002, 5:27 AM
Cool. 575 but you have to feel for the season ,Ilike that.
on some deleted poem 26 Sep 2002, 9:19 AM
7-10-7 HAIKU? Spring rules!!!!
on some deleted poem 26 Sep 2002, 9:28 AM
And you say you don't have "it".
POSH!!!!When you do that I "see" you. Keep on keepin' on!