| Re: The Nights Draw In by Nicholas Jones |
25-Sep-02/5:24 AM |
You ARE prepared. Yup put label back on. Then "acquire" a ride!
Descriptive warm fuzzies abound.9
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| Re: WLPAN by Nicholas Jones |
25-Sep-02/5:27 AM |
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Blew my wad on your other poem, liked this one too.8
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| Re: myself by decadentlaurel |
25-Sep-02/5:31 AM |
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The openness is what makes this work for me.7 Know this: Only you can set yoursel free!
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25-Sep-02/5:34 AM |
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Not at all. I see this and feel it too. Really good actually.8
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| Re: 5 p.m. by cobalt |
25-Sep-02/3:19 PM |
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Be glad you dont have a CB to listen to everyones unintelligible droning whilst stuck. I like orange soda.8 Only 'cause I'm still learning.
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| Re: Rescue 911 by searching |
25-Sep-02/3:23 PM |
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Imagine all the pain and suffering that will dissipate when people listen to their own hearts instead of"society". Ifind no flaws.10
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| Re: Life Of Sorrow by squall1leonheart |
25-Sep-02/4:48 PM |
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Yes, line breaks. Another good topic. Take heart, you're not like them if you're asking "why". Keep trying but...BREATHE!
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| Re: WHY by adrenalize |
25-Sep-02/7:03 PM |
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Def-Leppard fan? Wouldn't change much,can't find where.....7
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25-Sep-02/7:05 PM |
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This seems unfinished,unanswered. I'm sorry for the loss.8
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| Re: Noblesse Oblige by Christof |
25-Sep-02/7:10 PM |
I hope you get to this comment.
I've got Isaac Hayes playing and I read it again. I saw it. wow.
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25-Sep-02/7:21 PM |
Epic. Like that needed to be said.
I like the touch and go feeling. This ones gonna last.
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| Re: The Writing Life #2 by poetandknowit |
25-Sep-02/8:45 PM |
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Good flow! Nailed the 5-7-5! What season is it?
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25-Sep-02/8:47 PM |
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26-Sep-02/5:10 AM |
DAMNIT! Every time I get an idea to write about something some damn bastard beats me to it! GRRRRRR!!!!
HATS OFF THOUGH! Can I still do....
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| Re: Fraternity by Christof |
26-Sep-02/5:15 AM |
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Thats funny! I really was feeling a war. Then that door-thing spun me good. Fun. I see the pattern too.Thanks for teaching me.
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| Re: Nocturne by w~* ATHENA *~w |
26-Sep-02/5:19 AM |
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26-Sep-02/5:24 AM |
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Simple but effective,and humorous too! Do haikus really need titles?(rhetorical)A season would have worked with this. i'm obsessed with seasons.(Ithink my wife did that to me). Loved it.
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26-Sep-02/5:27 AM |
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Cool. 575 but you have to feel for the season ,Ilike that.
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26-Sep-02/9:19 AM |
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7-10-7 HAIKU? Spring rules!!!!
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26-Sep-02/9:28 AM |
And you say you don't have "it".
POSH!!!!When you do that I "see" you. Keep on keepin' on!
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