on Spanish fLie by flatliner
23 Sep 2002, 3:50 PM
Thanks zin, I was just kicking myself for not staying in spanish in H.S. It does seem to flow though.7
on some deleted poem
23 Sep 2002, 5:21 PM
Ah yes, but it feels good,no? If you stop will you cease to be? Overall, well executed ,fun.8
on Broken Tomarrow by DreamMachine
23 Sep 2002, 6:37 PM
POW-ER-FUL. Assuming spelling is purposeful,10
on some deleted poem
23 Sep 2002, 6:40 PM
Sorry, too personal to rank.
on When The Iron Curtain Came Down by RoseEyes
23 Sep 2002, 9:28 PM
You are deeper than I. What is wrong with this system?!!! Iknow I scored you a 7!!!!
on some deleted poem
24 Sep 2002, 5:09 AM
Yup yup. Great flow,simple and deep. Personal pains are always difficult to describe.Thats what makes poetry, poetry. No changes.9
on happy hour by Limness
24 Sep 2002, 5:14 AM
Well, so much for writing about the 9-5 crowd. Covered it better than I might've.9
on Triangle of the Courtyard Square by OneFingerAnswer
24 Sep 2002, 5:24 AM
I tire of pain and misery so I read pieces too fast. I missed the (he) and therefore missed the triangle. But a fascinating view!8
on Wind Elemental by DreamMachine
24 Sep 2002, 5:32 AM
Is the writer high on something? Or are they wishing they were elsewhere.Either way good.9
on Since The Fall by harrytuttle
24 Sep 2002, 12:57 PM
Business relationship gone sour? Cool though.7
on some deleted poem
24 Sep 2002, 1:04 PM
TRUE DAT! But sometimes one must travel many wrong roads to find "their" road. Liked it.8
on The Masonic Underling & the 33 degree by horus8
24 Sep 2002, 1:31 PM
I smell an affair, but I don't understand the mechanics of Haiku.8 Can someone break Haiku down for me?I'd like to try one on for size.
on some deleted poem
24 Sep 2002, 4:09 PM
Ah yes! The urge to step on the "little ones".As a truck driver I know it well.9 Watch for mine in a few days.
on some deleted poem
24 Sep 2002, 4:23 PM
I have a solution to this but I can't share it yet.7 A little tweaking it would flow better.
on We Poor Rise by Wulf
24 Sep 2002, 4:50 PM
Screw flow! CONTENT CONTENT CONTENT! 9
on The Sands Of Time by squall1leonheart
24 Sep 2002, 5:58 PM
Work on your spelling a little. Work downpage a little too, please.
Sands of time is an excellent subject.I hope you're not really that sad at 11 yrs. Welcome to the pool.8
Sands of time is an excellent subject.I hope you're not really that sad at 11 yrs. Welcome to the pool.8
on some deleted poem
25 Sep 2002, 5:04 AM
This has a 70's black movement feel to it. I cant see the depth,but I can feel it.7
on You don't know me by toredikt
25 Sep 2002, 5:08 AM
Yes, yes. s-4,L6 lose the"a". 8
on Noblesse Oblige by Christof
25 Sep 2002, 5:18 AM
Never got to go to a big college like you blokes. Maybe I'm better for it. Who knows. I should read some cromwell. Ireland has been calling me for years.(i'dbetter go soon) Ports are heavy but go well with tiramisu. I like parrano myself. Great content good beat.8