Re: Spanish fLie by flatliner	23-Sep-02/3:50 PM
Thanks zin, I was just kicking myself for not staying in spanish in H.S. It does seem to flow though.7
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Sep-02/5:21 PM
Ah yes, but it feels good,no? If you stop will you cease to be? Overall, well executed ,fun.8
Re: Broken Tomarrow by DreamMachine	23-Sep-02/6:37 PM
POW-ER-FUL. Assuming spelling is purposeful,10
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Sep-02/6:40 PM
Sorry, too personal to rank.
Re: When The Iron Curtain Came Down by RoseEyes	23-Sep-02/9:28 PM
You are deeper than I. What is wrong with this system?!!! Iknow I scored you a 7!!!!
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Sep-02/5:09 AM
Yup yup. Great flow,simple and deep. Personal pains are always difficult to describe.Thats what makes poetry, poetry. No changes.9
Re: happy hour by Limness	24-Sep-02/5:14 AM
Well, so much for writing about the 9-5 crowd. Covered it better than I might've.9
Re: Triangle of the Courtyard Square by OneFingerAnswer	24-Sep-02/5:24 AM
I tire of pain and misery so I read pieces too fast. I missed the (he) and therefore missed the triangle. But a fascinating view!8
Re: Wind Elemental by DreamMachine	24-Sep-02/5:32 AM
Is the writer high on something? Or are they wishing they were elsewhere.Either way good.9
Re: Since The Fall by harrytuttle	24-Sep-02/12:57 PM
Business relationship gone sour? Cool though.7
Re: Taffy by knickytoy	24-Sep-02/1:00 PM
Nice depth without losing the reader. Personally,leave it alone.8
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Sep-02/1:04 PM
TRUE DAT! But sometimes one must travel many wrong roads to find "their" road. Liked it.8
Re: The Masonic Underling & the 33 degree by horus8	24-Sep-02/1:31 PM
I smell an affair, but I don't understand the mechanics of Haiku.8 Can someone break Haiku down for me?I'd like to try one on for size.
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Sep-02/4:09 PM
Ah yes! The urge to step on the "little ones".As a truck driver I know it well.9 Watch for mine in a few days.
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Sep-02/4:23 PM
I have a solution to this but I can't share it yet.7 A little tweaking it would flow better.
Re: We Poor Rise by Wulf	24-Sep-02/4:50 PM
Screw flow! CONTENT CONTENT CONTENT! 9
Re: The Sands Of Time by squall1leonheart	24-Sep-02/5:58 PM
Work on your spelling a little. Work downpage a little too, please. Sands of time is an excellent subject.I hope you're not really that sad at 11 yrs. Welcome to the pool.8
regarding some deleted poem...	25-Sep-02/5:04 AM
This has a 70's black movement feel to it. I cant see the depth,but I can feel it.7
Re: You don't know me by toredikt	25-Sep-02/5:08 AM
Yes, yes. s-4,L6 lose the"a". 8
Re: Noblesse Oblige by Christof	25-Sep-02/5:18 AM
Never got to go to a big college like you blokes. Maybe I'm better for it. Who knows. I should read some cromwell. Ireland has been calling me for years.(i'dbetter go soon) Ports are heavy but go well with tiramisu. I like parrano myself. Great content good beat.8