Re: Haiku for Mum by waltfreakinwhitman	1-Oct-02/11:05 AM
Actually, I saw a sweeter side to this. Or maybe I should windex my minds eye.
Re: Wednesday's Breaking by poetandknowit	1-Oct-02/11:51 AM
I wish my wife spooned me like that! Forgive me if I take this at face value. No,wait... You are the roommate, the dead shape is the bed? I have to understand depth before I can write it. Yes?
Re: Norman #86 by Owner of the Sky	2-Oct-02/6:59 AM
Good, I like it. It takes a couple of readings, that makes it better. If you care(9. Hi K!
Re: Theoretical Islamic Math by Bachus	2-Oct-02/7:02 AM
Goofball. Loved it. If you want, I'll score it. Just say so.
Re: Local Boy Makes Good by Gwyrfab	2-Oct-02/9:26 AM
Too bad this kind of thing is still going on! Quite enjoyable,thanks.
Re: my first poem by rosiebailey	2-Oct-02/9:56 AM
Leaving something this open is alluring , to say the least. Good job RB, and welcome.
Re: An Action by joho117	2-Oct-02/10:04 AM
This and "Tomorrow" are good. Work upwards from here. The other two are beneath you.
Re: Why? by Bazilla	2-Oct-02/10:10 AM
Because you're thinking and that's good. Have fun.
Re: Little wishing well by gadget	2-Oct-02/10:13 AM
Repetetive. A good start, you can do better. Don't say it. FEEL it!
Re: Ode to Molly by knickytoy	2-Oct-02/2:41 PM
I cant have one of those, I'm allergic. Cute and full of love.
Re: Temptation Stings, Midday Nashville by <~>	2-Oct-02/2:55 PM
Boy I hate erring on the side of safety! But then it's safer that way. How redundant.
Re: On The Bench Outside Gruhn's Guitars by <~>	2-Oct-02/2:59 PM
I have no idea which way to go with this.... my head hurts.
Re: On The Bench Outside Gruhn's Guitars by <~>	2-Oct-02/3:20 PM
Are you in nashville perm or is this wErkkk? I've been through there and I have thought many a time to visit the grand ole opry, but haven't done it yet.
Re: At my grandmother's aging sight by vulcan	3-Oct-02/10:41 AM
I agree, and I share. This is anazingly creative! Shows me other dimensions that I should pay attention to. Thanks.
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Oct-02/10:48 AM
I love the power behind this. No changes in my opinion. Absolutely a killer piece. No pun intended.
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Oct-02/10:53 AM
I dont know what you changed. I dont thinks it's important. I pray you're not trying to force this Idea in any particular direction yet. Give it as much time as it needs. Nurture it. "When art is given a time frame, it ceases to be art" Love your smiles and blushes . YOU are adorable.
Re: why? by little_angel_maria	3-Oct-02/2:15 PM
As long as you continue to FEEL, your poetry will be fine. I'm sorry for your pain.
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Oct-02/4:11 PM
IN-TENSE!
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Oct-02/4:08 PM
My wife and I discussed this and we pulled all kinds of interesting theories from it. It's fine.
Re: Gaze by AuntyM	6-Oct-02/7:27 AM
Good contrast, nice visuals,and that grooovy warm fuzzy feeling to boot.